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Well, there we have it. One more chapter left to go. We're looking at an early December completion date. (Completely posted that is). Thank you for reading. More excitement (and some humor) in Chapter 10. Please leave your comments here.  *** Missing Lois - TOC
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"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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Penny's an interesting character. She loves Lara and is loyal to the Kents but she can't seem to overcome her attraction to Bruce Wayne.
Bruce himself is an enigma. He claims to want to work with Superman yet threatens he and his family with Kryptonite? I hope you shed some more light on this.
Yeah! Our happy couple is finally making up!
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Ditto to what Joan said. More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Joan & Laurach: Yes, Lois and Clark are working their way back to where they were. Building back that trust bridge. Bruce Wayne... What the readers know to be true about him is true in my story as well... Let's just say, he's not as much as a people-person as Clark Kent is.
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One more! He rested his head against hers. “Not as much as I love you, Lois Lane.” He winced as soon as he said it. She was going to take it the wrong way. Please, don’t explode. Please. He pulled back and looked in her eyes.  Michael
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Michael:  Oh, dear. Have I've got my channels mixed up again. <<shakes head sadly>> Really? *That’s* his excuse? Well, Clark is always saying he likes honesty. “Please don’t kill me. Please? Pretty please?”  And not sneak peeks.
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I wanted him to talk him down.  Well, that won't help matters any. I think this is where the picture of the Batman face palm goes. Michael
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