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#82089 09/16/11 05:44 PM
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Hello! Things are getting a little interesting for Lois. As always comments are welcome.


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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clap Interesting, indeed! I love how you had Lois kicking butt in this chapter- and her disguise was pulled off perfectly! The ending with her pestering the officer was just the icing on the cake!

As always, looking forward to more wink (though not sure if I'll have time to comment on Monday- classes starting up again *finally*). Great chapter!


Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain

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