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Thoughts?

Interesting premise.

The scene with Perry, Jimmy, Lois and Clark was great. I could hear the disbelief in their words.

So, exactly how much damage can you do with a feather duster-gun?

Corrina.

Funny! I was giggling throughout. Thank you. Always enjoy a good laugh.

And if my daughter is anything to go by, yes, people will do ANYTHING if you promise they will get tickled otherwise.

CK isn't ticklish is he? Hmmmm. I wonder what will show up in part 2.

The black skin tight outfit with a red feather dangling from her chest made me think it was a different nfic type of Tickler at first. Glad to know it's the good ol' fashioned clean kind.

At first, with the title being "The Case of the Tickler" I was wondering... I think this is a clever start- very cute. And I certainly hope CK is ticklish... Can't wait for more!

Cannot wait for part 2! I'm also wondering if Clark is ticklish now!

I'm glad everyone thought it was funny. The scene with Perry, Jimmy, Lois and Clark was fun to write.

Thanks for the feedback. Since the first chapter was more of a teaser, I'll have chapter two up soon. That way, we can get into the plot a little bit more.

Interesting premise - looking forward to more.

Glad you liked the opening. I'm not sure if you've seen it or not yet, but I actually already posted a second chapter. I just thought I'd let you know in case you'd missed it.