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Things are wrapping up! I'm curious... any remaining questions?

Great to have Lois and Clark together and Lex captured.

I am wondering how Lex determined that Linda King was Lois Lane.

Joan

A great way to wrap things up, though I admit I was a bit confused about the assassin pulling out an FBI badge. As I continued reading, however, I realized what was going on. Much better that he made a deal with the FBI than that he'd been working undercover, which was my original assumption.

I really enjoyed the opening scene and the line about how vulnerable Clark's heart was and yet also how strong it was.

Very strong climax--and I'm very relieved Clark used heat-vision and stayed far away from the Kryptonite. I hate seeing him hurt by that stuff! And I'm relieved Lex is now dealt with--he's not my favorite character either.

Can't wait for the end--thanks.

So, things are wrapping up.

I was surprised at how open Lex was in his scheming. Now that he's involved Lucy and made himself vulnerable to phone tapping, it feels like he's dropping the facade and is ready to go rogue. He must feel really cornered with Lois being around.

And how did Jon manage to get a job as an FBI agent? He could turn state's evidence, but why would they ever hand him a badge? The NIA, sure. But the FBI? I did figure for a while that the assassinations where faked. But that would feel like a cop out, so... good that you didn't go that way.

You did quite a clever job with the kryptonite. The cufflinks do seem small enough that Clark would be able to move around them in Lex's office. That's what you get for living in pomp.

And now with just one part left and Lex hanging out there to dry, will he drop the bomb on Lois and reveal her own secrets. No matter what, this should easily discredit her, if nothing else. And even if most people wouldn't believe it with just Lex telling and Jon denying, I'm sure the other papers would have the time to investigate if it means a chance to get rid of the competition.

Michael

scifiJoan I went over this in an earlier part -- Lex knew Lois was working for him, and knew her real identity from the start -- he played ignorance about it to his advantage.

Thanks for the comments antiKryptonite!

Darth Michael
I went round on this with my betas. I don't know a lot about intel jobs, so the NIA maybe would have been a better choice.
But I did have Jon clarify here:
He's not officially working for them, but he's working WITH them, with the possibility of more if he could do this job.


I didn't see that loophole... this story would have to go a few more chapters if it did... suffice to say, Jon got Lois' slate wiped clean -- so unless Lex had proof -- she's Scot free. Unless I did a sequel...

Posting the end soon -- hold that thought -- I think I may wait until tomorrow. I was out of town this weekend and want to put a few finishing touches on the final part that my brain can't seem to deal with right now. :p But I'll have it done by tomorrow morning, promise!

You're right. My bad there Mozartmaid. Sorry.

Those things happen when I try to do too many things at once.

Looking forward to the final chapter.

Joan