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What a waffy, fun story, Bob! I admit, I kept expecting that Clark would leave again, neither truly remembering their first meet. But woohoo, what a twist at the end. And now I am groveling for you to turn htis into a big story about their formative years. I'm guessing they will end going to the same college. Perhaps getting married during their year off? Did I already ask for a long story continuing this verse? Please? Pretty please?

Michael

EvelynC:
Thank you, I hope you had a great Feb. 14.


Framework4:
You said: See the dangers of exploring new universes? And yes, that thought has crossed my mind.


EmilyC:
It was destiny. Even Clark at his most bonehead can figure out what to do when the universe tells you in big bold letters. FLY HER TO PARIS – NOW!


anonpip:
I’m glad you liked it.


Michael:
I wish I could promise. I have some ideas, and they run very much along the lines you describe, but I don’t know if they will lead anywhere.


Thanks again everyone. It was truly my pleasure to share this one.
Bob

Long sigh. Another sigh. Seriously a magical ending. I would go as far as saying the beginning was pretty standard (the writing is excellent, but a standard boy sees girl across the room type thing), but that ending just killed it and made it a story I've reread multiple times. Thank you.

Tailee, I'm glad you liked the story. I just wandered in today to see what was going on and you have brightened my whole day.

Thank you for the kind note.
Bob

Ahh--wow! This was such a beautiful story, Bob ...

After reading Tailee's FDK, I went searching for it this morning--and what a find! I really love alternate beginning stories where Lois and Clark meet in a new or unexpected way. You created such a magical night for them to meet, fall in love, and realize their destiny. I enjoyed everything about it--and read the story, and the FDK, with a huge grin on my face.

Thanks for a great way to start the day off
Laura

Wow! Two days in a row!

Hi, Laura.
Me too. But I find them so hard to think of. I don't remember what exactly triggered this idea, but I knew right from the first that it felt like a good one.

These last couple of days make me feel like I need to dust off the word processor and go in search of my long-lost muse.

Thank you so much for the feedback.
Bob

Bob stated:






Great story, Bob...
Laura