Lois & Clark Forums Forums Fan Fiction Lois & Clark Fanfic FDK: Ch. 13 Nighttime in the Daytime

Feedback here, please. We are making progress!
Thank you all for reading, however many of you are left!
regards
Artemis

Yay! new part!!!

Great part! I love how you have wound so many quotes from the show into your story, so it gives us lots of points of reference, but with your great slant on the plot.

But why is Lois afraid to tell Clark the truth of their relationship? Is it that she wants him to remember how they feel about each other without her prompt? She encouraged the kiss, but then didn't encourage him at all right after it to understand what he was obviously feeling and confused about their relationship. Was it suddenly too much for her? Will all that become clearer soon?

And is Lois' father there to meet with Henderson and Clark? Does he know more about Clark's 3rd job? Fascinating! Can't wait for more!!!

Yes, ending the chapter with Lois's father coming in was an inspired masterstroke. Now I can't help wonder why. Do they know that CK=S? Has Henderson spilled the beans? Or do they just suspect that his amnesia is a fake?

Too bad that Lois and Pete's efforts to help him haven't been conclusive so far.

Can't wait for more.

Delightful part.

Great part and looking forward to more!

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. This is turning out longer than I originally planned. But I bend to the will of the muse.
Yes, that's it. She wants it to be genuine.
She had great hopes for the kiss, but it wasn't right for her, hence the wax dummy comment. He was now a stranger to her without his whole personality.

Yes
No. Admiral Lane is there because he is head of the NIA in Metropolis and he doesn't know CK=S. Only Henderson knows and he is keeping it a secret.
Thanks all of you for your comments. More on the way. Next up, the nfic folder.

Artemis

Yes, I like it!

It's great to see Lois interact with an amnesiac Clark and trying to make him remember. This time she knows that he is Superman, which makes it even more interesting. I'm very much enjoying the romance!

Lois will need to find a way to revive Clark's memory in a hurry, however, before the fragment of Nightfall hits. I really wonder what Henderson wanted with Clark all alone, and why Lois's father came to talk to her.

Ann

Thanks for your comments, Ann. The purpose in going to the FBI building wasn't sinister. It was to put Clark in another familiar environment, his FBI office. The Admiral's arrival was a surprise to the FBI. That will come out later.
regards
Artemis

Nice

About the press conference. They made it sound as if they only sent the nuke after Superman has failed. But wouldn't astronomers be able to refute this claim. Also, the life stream it self was already pretty suspect. Shouldn't somebody pick up on all that?

Right, I forgot she doesn't know.

Michael

Hi DM:
That's why Daitch was unhappy. Well, one of the reasons, anyway. Who in the modern press listens to astronomers?
er - life stream. Live stream from TV you mean? It happened so close together that you couldn't tell from the TV broadcast.
Thanks for reading
Artemis