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Liked this part very much

So both Lois and Clark are aware that they like and are attracted to each other ... but when will they admit this?

I think like many others, I like the idea behind this story but am waiting until things start to deviate from the pilot episode.

We need to see more deviation to get excited about. That could even be in the form of Lois' 'problems' dealing with the loss of Claude, even after all this time.

It is promising to see that Lois finds herself 'interested' in this greenhorn reporter that she's been saddled with and her confusion over those feelings.

Looking forward to more of this as the story moves forward and away from familiar territory.

Tank (who wonders how long Lois is going to consider Cat her good friend if she keeps coming after Clark)

So you did kill Platt after all. Their cagey non-flirting is really cute and this
had me go

Michael

Feedback is a breath of fresh air in a house full of burnt incense.

DW, we might have to wait for either of them to admit being attracted to the other. They're both emotionally damaged and need some time to heal.

Tank, I thought that giving Lois a dead spouse was a change from the pilot. I assume, though, that you mean a change in the action. There will be some changes later on. And Lois knows who and what Cat is.

Michael, glad you like the flirting/not-flirting. And the Chippendales.

Next part up soon!