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Thoughts? 
"Women frustrate men because they're too complicated. Men frustrate women because they're not complicated enough."
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WOW, that was full of action and kisses, the best !
I loved how Lois barged in Clark and Mayson, poor girl, don't have the time to know what collided her !
And the best reply of this part :
"The only woman you should be kissing, Clark Kent, is me!”
Excellent, I am eager to read the next part !
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Cute! I like it! More soon! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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“You keep making mistakes, Clark, and I can’t let you do that anymore.”
“Let me?” he asked, astonished at her gall.
She turned suddenly and looked him straight in the eye. “The only woman you should be kissing, Clark Kent, is me!” I burst out laughing at this! It's so true! I'm glad that Lois decided to take the bull by the horns and let Clark know the way things are going to be from now on!
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I definitely loved Lois' reaction to seeing Clark kiss Mayson (or the other way around?)
So more soon, please?
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Whee, fun! Gotta love the direct approach. Now all Clark has to do is navigate the "oh, by the way, I'm Superman" minefield, and they'll go on to live happily ever after. Seeing as you've got two more parts to post, I'm guessing it'll get a little messy in the meantime  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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You had me slack-jawed at Lois's reactions. Wonderful fluff with just a hint of naughty. More soon?
Michael
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** One month later **
Hello, I thought about your story, and I would like to know if you are going to post the next parts !! I am waiting for it ! Please ...
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