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FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68553 01/04/10 07:26 AM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921 A anonpip OP Features Writer
OP anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	Comments? I'll try to post again on Wednesday, but it may be Thursday.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68554 01/04/10 08:17 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326 R robinson Beat Reporter
robinson Beat Reporter R Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326	Excellent! I love this part and Lois' reaction to it all. I am sure she does realize why Clark is scared or that he is scared. I am looking forward to seeing Martha's reaction and how the meeting goes. Will the S costume come from this meeting? I hope you can post real soon. I am anxious for the next part. Kathy Have Chili Your Way, Every Way www.chili-everyway.com robinson

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68555 01/04/10 08:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,971 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,971 Likes: 28	squeeeeee squeeeeeeeeeeee /starts camping out, waiting for Wednesday to come/ Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68556 01/04/10 01:56 PM
Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 398 Likes: 1 ~Philadelphia, PA AmyPrime Beat Reporter
AmyPrime Beat Reporter Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 398 Likes: 1 ~Philadelphia, PA	I love the way Lois is just kind of leading a dumbfounded Clark around by the nose.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68557 01/04/10 03:40 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA S sarahg Beat Reporter
sarahg Beat Reporter S Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA	love it!!!!!! different than what would be expected, but works so well! more!!!

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68558 01/05/10 03:06 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	I really like how you show Clark's total emotional collapse after he realizes Lois knows his secret. He's been keeping the secret so hard for so long, that when she finds out, he collapses like a jelly.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68559 01/07/10 06:22 AM
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OP anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	Thank you for all the feedback!! And I was so worried that everyone would be disappointed in Lois' reaction. Kathy - The S costume is indeed coming up soon. If not the next part (which, fingers crossed, will be posted today) then the one after that. Michael - That would be a funny plot twist - Lois on drugs. This fic could do down a really dark path. Lois' loosing the internship causes her to turn to drugs, this makes Clark feel incredibly guilty... This could lead to very bad things... And yes, you did mention that Lois and Clark had more talent than half his newsroom combined. I think I even said that I didn't agree with you, but it turns out that Perry did. Amy - I like that imagery, too. Thanks, Sarah! Thanks, IolantheAlias - Clark is a bit like this for awhile longer, too...

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68560 01/07/10 06:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,971 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,971 Likes: 28	Quote Michael - That would be a funny plot twist - Lois on drugs. This fic could do down a really dark path. Lois' loosing the internship causes her to turn to drugs, this makes Clark feel incredibly guilty... This could lead to very bad things... That wasn't meant as "let's make Lois do Crack and try find 'creative' ways for getting the money she needs". Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (47/54) #68561 01/07/10 06:54 AM
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OP anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	I don't know. Sounds like a story in the making...

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