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Wow, it seems like it has been forever... and it has. I do apologize for my absence--if tomatoes are to be thrown, please cut them up first so that I can use them in my salad. Thanks!
I'm glad to be back in the writing saddle and really am committed to finishing this tale. I do appreciate those of you that are still on board. We'll get there yet!
So, about chapter 10... what'd you think?
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It is wonderful to see the next part. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I love how the secret identity thing for Lois closely mirrors what is normally Clark's secret identity. Although when Clark figures out what Lois is doing maybe it will give him ideas on how he can handle his secret identity. Not sure if that is what you have planned. Kathy www.chili-everyway.com/easy-chili-recipe.html
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You're back in action!  I'll admit, the beginning confused me a little. Then as I read on, I realized you jumped ahead a little. And I went awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Smirking, he started to lean down and forward only to be interrupted by the sound of his mother calling Lois’s name. Arrrrrrgh. Bad Martha. Bad.  Michael
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yay! so happy you're back! yay!
love this part - introspective and sweet. more, soon, please?
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wohoo!! new post! i loved it.. now what you should do is go into the future where he's a writer and he's interviewing her after years of not hearing of each other.. that would be kinda nice.. i think :rolleyes:
Sarah,
Tempus: You want to know the future, Miss Lane? No one works, no one argues, there are 9,000 channels and nothing on!
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Yay, Sonia! Welcome back! You write post-adolescent emotional angst like a pro. Can't wait to see where this is going next. And Perry! What a hoot! I can tell you're having fun putting familiar people into a very different setting. This L & C are younger and therefore immature, and your'e doing a great job of showing that. Can't wait to see what Martha and Perry cook up. Something tells me the two of them know each other from way back. 
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Oh, I've been meaning to respond to this part for a while now. I'm so glad to see you back with this story and I'm hoping that RL will let you stick with it -- especially with *that* ending.  Reading your stories is always a pleasure. Your sense of humor really tickles my fancy. Such as ... He was really starting to… well, *strongly like* having her in his space. Well, as long as you're being honest with yourself there, Clark. /me rolls eyes. The conversation between Lois and Clark in the barn was great. It was real and honest, which is an amazing accomplishment, especially for these two. Of course you ripped the rug out from under them with Sam's untimely return and the angsty non-goodbye. I was about to call you all kinds of evil until you brought in Perry (which put a smile on my face) and you brought Lois back to the farm for a proper goodbye kiss. Please, please, please post more soon. Tomorrow, yes? 
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What a fabulous part! I loved the Robin Williams line - "drive by fruiting" is one of my favorite movie quotes ever!
You write them so well, and Clark especially. I definitely did not expect Lois to come back to say goodbye, and Clark's response was so real, almost tangible.
I am so glad you're back! More soon please!
Amber
hoping that Lois writes and performs a song about her time in Kansas and a certain farmboy...
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Sonia! Michael
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Sonia, I think it's time we got caught up on these two. I still want to know if Lois will trust Clark with the whole story of her dual identity. And I want to know if Clark will trust Lois with his history. I want to know if Chloe will agree to record a duet album with Lois. I want to know if Clark ever gets to Metropolis, much less to the Daily Planet.
This is a very good story. I have the sense that it went in a slightly different direction than you'd originally intended, but it's still a very good story. Please come back and finish it as soon as RL allows!
Thanks.
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please come back and finish this story!
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I agree! If there is a point you're stuck on, let us know. We can help ferret out a solution. I know sometimes it can feel a little like  Let us know if we can help!
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eep! errr... not really a sticky point so much as a hugely, unfairly, busy semester. I thought that the last semester of coursework before dissertation was supposed to be laidback... I lied to myself. So--methinks after taking comprehensive exams in a couple of weeks a mind break in the form of writing fic is due. All in favor say 'aye'... Thanks for keeping me on the bubble!  ~s
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All in favor say 'aye'... Aye! Ann
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I'm looking forward to the rest of this one too!
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I add my enthusiastic 'Aye!' to the chorus.
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
- Stephen King, from On Writing
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Erm. /clears pockets/  Oops  , where did they come from. Meant to clear my throat, not my pocket. Aye. Michael
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Aye, aye!
(Stuffing the ballot box, I know, but nobody said anything about one person/one vote.)
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This *is* my happily ever after.
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Ah!!! What a fantastic part. I loved the "l" word bits--very nicely done. And what you have done with Perry is great. Like Amber, I didn't expect Lois to come back to say goodbye, but I am glad she did! 
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