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FDK here.

Thanks.

I'm not sure I'll be able to post part 11 tomorrow - it may be Wednesday morning when I get to it.

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Get back here right now and post the next part!!!!

Wonderfully written, loving and suspenseful at the same time - had me on the edge of my seat.

I am thinking Henderson is acting as a double agent


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It's so weird, Lois not trusting Henderson. But it works. smile


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I agree - get back here!

How did Henderson know where they were?

I was so shocked to learn that Henderson might be in cahoots with Trask. I don't think he is anymore, but I'm still feeling a little wary, especially with you throwing Scardino in the mix like that.

I didn't get a chance to comment before, but I did feel badly for Hodge's death. A fitting end for him, protecting Lois and Clark, but still sad.

Now I'm just hoping Lois learned enough from her emotional trauma to be able to help Clark with his.

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Ooo Lois figured things out fast hyper

Wonder how Henderson managed to find them. A tracking device? Or is the good friend Sarah in league with some unsavory crowd. Or is Henderson a good guy and in league with Sarah who is in league with some savory crowd?

Michael, wondeirng if you have any question marks left in that bag-o-letters of yours.


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I'm not sure I'll be able to post part 11 tomorrow - it may be Wednesday morning when I get to it.
You'll let us wait? That is torture ... how about posting the last three parts together ... now? laugh laugh laugh

I loved Clark's insecurities he seems to think Lois loves him only with powers ... lunkhead.

And Lois figured out about the Kryptonite, phew!

Great part!


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great part! getting even more interesting!

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robinson - Thank you for the FDK. Some answers are in Part 11 - which I'll post tomorrow.

DSDragon - I'm glad it works. Thanks!

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See Part 11 wink

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Now I'm just hoping Lois learned enough from her emotional trauma to be able to help Clark with his.
Thank You!! In many ways this story complements Adrift. Lois learnt a lot about grief - lessons she can now use to help Clark - in a similar way to how he helped her.

Also ... glad you liked Hodge enough to be sad at his passing.

Michael - A tracking device? Good idea.

Someone is definitely in cahoots with someone ...

Loved your comment about the question marks.

There are still two *very* important questions to come. wink

Kathryn - Thanks for leaving FDK.

The last few parts still need a little polishing. But from tomorrow, I should be able to post daily again.

I appreciated your comment re Clark's insecurities. I really wanted to show how shaken he is by this ... but still keep him in character.

Sarah - Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it.

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This story is thrilling! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment. I was sad for Hodge, too. frown I hope he was successful in his plan to eliminate Trask. So many questions indeed. You couldn't have picked a more fitting title. wink I'm looking forward to the answers... hyper

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Andreia Thanks for your FDK.

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It's funny how we're all quite happy for the bad guys to be 'eliminated'. wink

I'm glad you're reading and enjoying the story. Thanks for your comment re Hodge.

Corrina.


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