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FDK: Green #65167 07/25/09 07:56 AM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana HappyGirl OP Top Banana
OP HappyGirl Top Banana Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana	Nice little stream of consciousness vignette, Kathryn. I don't know why you hesitated to post it, but I'm glad you decided to share it with us after all. Nicely done. This is my happily ever after.

Re: FDK: Green #65168 07/25/09 05:35 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,122 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk Kerth
Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,122 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia	I loved it when I first read it ... and I still love it. Well-written and poignant. Good job, Kathryn.

Re: FDK: Green #65169 07/26/09 03:10 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Nicely done. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Green #65170 07/26/09 03:44 PM
Joined: May 2007 Posts: 86 the dark side of the moon anagram Freelance Reporter
anagram Freelance Reporter Joined: May 2007 Posts: 86 the dark side of the moon	Very nicely written. You captured Clark's pain and resolve beautifully. A great example of Clark's/Superman's willpower (Despite the liberty we sometimes take with these characters, Superman -- in all his incarnations -- is known for his willpower; he never gives up.) This snippet encapsulates that perfectly. All right... all right... but apart from better sanitation and medicine and education and irrigation and public health and roads and a freshwater system and baths and public order... what have the Romans done for us?

Re: FDK: Green #65171 07/26/09 05:14 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Wow! Well done. I'm always in awe of people who can write short and sweet. I can't seem to do that and my fics always run way long. So when you can write a teeny tiny vignette and have it be this excellent, all I can say is, Wow!

Re: FDK: Green #65172 07/27/09 10:54 AM
Joined: May 2006 Posts: 478 Likes: 2 Chipper in the Alps Kathryn84 Beat Reporter
Kathryn84 Beat Reporter Joined: May 2006 Posts: 478 Likes: 2 Chipper in the Alps	Thanks for leaving FDK! HappyGirl I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure if it was good because I'm a bit insecure about posing anything I've written because English isn't my native language and I don't want to make mistakes. Female Hawk Thank you. I wouldn't have posted it without your encouragement. Laura Thank you! anagram Thanks, I always thought we haven't seen enough of Clark in that episode. He had suffered so much in that cage and he barely managed to escape from it. IolantheAlias Quote I'm always in awe of people who can write short and sweet. I have my difficulties with writing longer stories. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! Kathryn

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