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FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63545 05/14/09 09:12 AM
Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 252 Metropolis T The Little Tornado OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP The Little Tornado Hack from Nowheresville T Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 252 Metropolis	Artemis. I loved it. I am so thrilled that Clark is a spy! And he has no idea who 'Lola' is. And that she is so infamous as Lois that the cops know her! OMG!!! SEVERAL SHADES OF AWESOME!!! Wants more. Specifically more sexy Lois lounge singing and Clark breaking glasses and possibly the cops catching him doing it on camera. And Clark not knowing why after he rescues the chicken, that he feels he needs to hold on to it? Priceless!!! The Little Tornado. The Little Tornado is .... .... Marisa Wikramanayake Freelance Writer & Editor, Board Member of SoEWA and Writing WA http://www.marisa.com.au

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63546 05/14/09 12:57 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada IreneD Columnist
IreneD Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada	So I come back to the boards after a long absence and there's a new story by Artemis. How's that for timing! Great alternate start! This looks like it's going to be fun. Irene I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63547 05/14/09 02:50 PM
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robinson Beat Reporter R Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326	I love it. A great alternative start with lots of great potential. I am looking forward to more hopefully real soon robinson

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63548 05/14/09 05:56 PM
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HappyGirl Top Banana Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana	Echoing all of the above and still smiling from this line: "The chicken walked into the bar..." I know you know that sounds like the start of a bad joke. This is my happily ever after.

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63549 05/14/09 07:07 PM
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amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	That is a fascinating beginning! So Lex, not the Toasters or the Metros, is Clark's target? Henderson's identification and subsequent frustration at Lois' presence was hilarious! When do we get more? Amber

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63550 05/15/09 03:20 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	"The chicken walked into the bar..." Yes, I couldn't resist that image. Thanks for your feedback and encouragement all. TLT This idea of Clark being a fed working undercover to take down organized crime (i.e. Luthor) has been percolating in my head for some time. I'm glad to hear everything I intended came across! "And Clark not knowing why after he rescues the chicken, that he feels he needs to hold on to it? Priceless!!" That was a last minute inspiration, so I need to listen to my muse! Irene D. So glad you are back on the boards! I'm flattered. I can't say how many times I've reread Firestorm and all the others. In case you're wondering, you haven't missed any of my fic. I've been out of commission on writing for several years, so I'm nervous about sticking my toe back in the water. robinson I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to get longer chapters. HappyGirl I like jokes. And bar scenes. Maybe there will be more, but not at the Metro Club after this beginning. So glad you caught the references. As to posting, I'm leaving for a week. So unless a miracle of inspiration happens today, it will be next Saturday. I don't like the keyboard on my portable and can't really post more than one sentence on it. My plan is somewhere around 10 parts to wrap up this intro story and continue the universe in subsequent separate stories. To me that makes easier posting and reading. Thanks again for your encouragement! Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63551 05/17/09 08:41 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	Nice beginning, even if I don't have the time to leave proper feedback. Elisabeth

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63552 05/24/09 10:26 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28	Hi Artemis! Sorry I’m late for the party but I sort of got swamped with fics Quote Clark pulled the paper toward him, scanned it briefly and scratched “Charles King” on the signature line. Oh, he didn’t sign it Kal-El, that’s how. Quote She was a very nice looking blond with a good figure and an attractive face. On reflex he smiled one of his megawatt smiles. Clark! Quote “Call me Toni,” she smiled back at him and took the signed paper with her left hand, which had beautifully manicured long red nails and a notable absence of a ring on her fourth finger. Clark! Heel. Quote ‘Wow, I hope the entertainment is worth this,’ he mused. Depends. Is Lola Dane singing? Quote “Not much,” replied Gomez, swiveling his chair around to look at the Inspector. “How did Kent get such high angles with the cameras? I’ve never seen a view like that. And what’s the story on him anyway? Why isn’t one of our guys undercover?” LOL. So Clark is a loan from Bureau 39, undercover at the Metro PD, undercover at the Metro Club? Quote The chicken walked into the bar with her head under her arm. Quote The chicken put the head down on the pavement and started brushing the smoke and dirt off Clark’s vest and shirt. This took me a moment until I checked the episode. You’re talking about her costume-head /slaps head/ Quote As the curtain opened, the offstage announcer exclaimed, “And now, Ladies and Gentlemen, straight from Gotham City…Miss Lola Dane!” Revealed as the curtain parted was a stately brunette with long hair in a form fitting blue gown standing behind a single microphone. Shouldn’t he recognize her? Quote His brain catching up to his reaction, he realized the singer was the chicken from yesterday. Lola, a name he could never forget. Atta boy. Verrrrry nice start. Part two will take a me a little while to get to, though Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63553 05/24/09 10:44 AM
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sarahg Beat Reporter S Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA	loving this! when's the next post?!!

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63554 05/24/09 11:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Michael Glad you enjoyed. There's a lot more to come. No Bureau 39 involved though. sarah Part 2 is up. Once a week, roughly, is my posting schedule with about 10 parts total. Thanks for the comments! Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63555 08/07/11 08:47 AM
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VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Ooh, I love the idea of alt-Clark as FBI. Perfect. And Lois, Luthor and the toasters... I've got to read more. Very enjoyable. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63556 08/07/11 10:55 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Hi Virginia: If you want the whole story complete, it is on the Archive and you don't have to wait for each part. r/ Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63557 08/07/11 05:37 PM
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VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Quote Originally posted by Artemis: Hi Virginia: If you want the whole story complete, it is on the Archive and you don't have to wait for each part. r/ Artemis I always forget to check the archive for completed fic(s). That will be easier than doing a search every time I have a few minutes to read. Thanks. I'll do that. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: All The Daytime & The Nighttime Part 1 #63558 08/08/11 03:13 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	You can still give feedback, though. I always enjoy that! Artemis P.S. the sequel "Nighttime in the Daytime" isn't on the Archive yet. History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

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