Dear FoLCs!
Sorry for my late answer - I have been very busy for the last few days.
I'm so proud that you like my story and so glad about all your comments.
A million thanks again for Wendy and Susanne. Without them, I would never have posted this piece.
I'm relieved that the most of you liked the pictured version - I know, it's not easy to view the pictures from the original episode as part of something new - they remind us of the original plot and might even distract us.
I put in hard work since I had to edit quite a few with Photo Paint - to make Lois's hair longer (I'm fear I wasn't perfect enough in this, Tank? *g*) and such niceties... but for all of you, who want to read this story "naked", it's now saved on my website (link below) in .txt, too! And I'll send it too lcfanfic.com, certainly!
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Thank you very much, Hazel!
"One of the best revelations I've ever read, and if we have still have a best revelation scene Kerth award next year, this would go on my noms list. Beautifully done!" I really blushed when I read this sentence of yours and believe me, it's very, very unusual for me to turn pink... *g* Thank you!!!
Kathy wrote:
The one thing that I personally am a little unsure about is Lois remaining in Smallville while Clark returns to capture the bad guys. It makes sense for the storyline: it was really a "job for Superman" and it gave Lois a chance to talk with Clark's parents about the cover story...but I was just surprised that Lois didn't put up any kind of resistance to being "left out of the action"Hm, I think that Lois was overwhelmed, she had a lot to sort out in her mind, about CK=Supi, about their love, about being "adopted" by Martha and Jonathan, about the great problem of how to resurrect Clark. There were two facts now: this was a job for Superman and she knows that she can't always fly whith him when he has to catch some gangster. Furthermore, if someone who knows about her dolefulness about Clark, like Perry for example, would see her - relaxed, happy, powerful, "fighting at the side of" Superman - he would be very astonished. And Lois didn't want to risk this before they found a solution to the resurrection-problem.
Is this convincing? But thanks to you, too, Kathy, for your comments!!!
And, last but not least @Wendy:
Now, what's your next story about? 
O Wendy, I would LOVE it to write something, believe me! It was a great joy, writing for myself and working together with you, but unfortunately there's nothing in my mind, which I could put into words.
The Scream "came to me" in the middle of the night, and this was half a year ago. I'm waiting for the next "flash of genius", but momentarily, there is nothing :-((( But don't fear, when a new idea comes to me, I will share it with you and I promise that I won't put it in the drawer!!!
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So, now I'm going back into my lurkdom. I feel so sorry that I don't comment all YOUR wonderful stories. But my reading (english) is so slow, that I would always be too late. But I'm always "with you", I never forget about you and your great fanfiction!
A big THANK YOU again for everyone who commented on my story, I really appreciate any and all input and comments. I'm so thrilled that so many of you enjoyed my (first) story! :-)))
Pathetic greetings with "Lois and Clark forever!!!"
Yours
Christiane
works very well!
Lois wrapped up the explanations rather neatly, didn't she? I liked the way she was able to use the circumstances to also explain their sudden change in relationship too.