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This was great! I love Lois and Clark's interaction can't wait for the next part!


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I'm glad you liked it =)

And I hope that explains how I've had Lois react to Clark a little...


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So many things in this chapter...

I didn’t think that much of Lex’s reaction to Clark’s name at the time. I’ll watch more for that in the future. Lois certainly picked up on Clark being evasive. eek

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He walked out the door only to feel a tug on his sleeve. He turned to face Lois once more and she leaned up and pressed a swift kiss on his lips before pulling away and closing her door.
Wow. I definitely like this Lois! dance

Of course, this reaction…
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At the close of a long day, Lois, Clark and Jimmy were gathered in Perry’s office. It was the first time all day Lois had come within ten feet of Clark voluntarily.
Is a Lois that I know. twins

I loved it all.

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I'm glad you liked it =) And yeah that was a part with a lot of changes... I also hope that knowing her history made Lois' reactions to Clark in that one part make a bit more sense...

I'm going to go ahead and post the next part tonight... the downside of my parents and grandparents all living within a 15 mile radius means I'm going to be tied up in Christmas things now... well... that and I have a visitor from Japan for the week

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The next part has some of my favorite lines and scenes so far devil


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Interesting to see Lois taking Clark instead of Jimmy and they still got caught in the warehouse laugh And then Lois opened up and Clark stopped her first. Followed by the confession of her past. Wow, I didn't expect that coming.

And I loved the sweet, little kiss in her apartment and Lucy is great, although a bit of a Jimmy-clone when it comes to interrupting things.

On to part 9, Michael wave


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Well... I wanted to keep some of the Lois/Lucy interaction in there =P and she was gone for the more important scene!


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