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Very nice!

So that's how Clark left the world of the knob-tailed gecko.

And I like the fact that he didn't think he was ready to take the big step to Metropolis yet.
Sometimes destiny just has to step in in spite of our best efforts.

Bob

Hi, Lieta!

Very nice story. And I loved the bit about the coin - reminded me of Harvey Dent / Two-Face.

And just a little thought - since there are more than a few Nancy's on the board, how about giving their nick name, too?

Nancy aka Classicalla (who wasn't your beta )

Bob: Thanks... I was writing a version of All Shook Up and this just popped into my head as a little event Clark might be able to remember... or maybe find the coin...

Thanks Nancy... I have the same problem as a Sara, lol, I added that it was anonpip... I was actually a little worried about being too much like Harvey but there's going to be a cute back story to that coin in the larger story I'm writing...

Cute story. I loved how destiny (or Herb) stepped in and made sure Clark didn't stay in Borneo too long. He needs to be in Metropolis to save Lois and Jimmy from Dr. Baines.

Nice ideawith the weighted coin.

Thanks BJ, I have a couple other snippets simmering right now... I may or may not write them up... but I'm also still looking for one more beta reader for my longer story...

Funny, Sara. Clark trying to force his luck and fate playing a trick on him Wonder what your big story is going to be like

Michael

hehe have to wait and see... my non-LnC watching beta is AWOL... she's my catch for when I do things that don't make sense... of course sometimes I have to tell her that that comes from the show but yeah...

Nicely written. I like how he has the act of leaving down to an artform.


Elisabeth

Thank you Elisabeth, I figured by that point it would have been an autopilot response...