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Sarah,

This was lovely, although I'm still not sure Larry is completely harmless. But I love his honesty about his feelings towards Lex. I would imagine a nine-year-old would idolize him and it would be hard to get over that. Presumably, his uncle seemed completely different than the man who made the news.

I can't wait to see where this is heading...

- Nancy

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Dangit, now you've got me hooked! *grumble* Well, now we all need more, especially with this turn of events. smile

Believe it or not, I'm very interested in what's going to happen with Alice . . . she's the wildcard.


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I'm enjoying this as well. More soon.

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So Lex had a brother. That's interesting.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go. Keep it coming!

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Sara, I have absolutely no idea where you're taking this. But it certainly makes you looking for more laugh

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I'm glad you're all enjoying my story.

Nancy - I'm glad you think he seemed honest about his feelings towards his uncle. I really worked to bring that across. Their relationship was complicated, especially as he looks back on it today. You'll find out more as we go along.

Beth - Brother? Where'd you get that idea? wink

I probably shouldn't say more. I may already be giving to much away! laugh

Look for part four on Wed. night.


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