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I loved the beginning with the flash backs. And the chapter as a whole, but...

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“No, feel free to continue to figure out the perfume thing,” Superman said as he moved to the door.
Taking a guess at who's on the other side...*key dramatic music* this should be.. interesting... laugh


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anonpip, I'm so loving your PML. It's one of my favorites and you're doing it marvelously. And Now Superman opens the door to a seven-veiled Lois laugh

Something I realized after you sent Lois to Clark on the first night instead of the second: They never did tell us what happened after Lois dragged Clark off laugh

And teenage-Lois with her locker-fears rotflol

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Thanks, Lieta and Michael!

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Taking a guess at who's on the other side...*key dramatic music* this should be.. interesting...
I certainly hope so. wink

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I'm so loving your PML. It's one of my favorites and you're doing it marvelously.
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I thought about skipping this episode as I wasn't sure how much would be different from the original, but it was way too funny an episode to skip. I have to admit, though, that I think this was my favorite chapter covering it. I loved writing Lois' first reaction to Clark after the perfume took effect.

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And teenage-Lois with her locker-fears
Thank you, thank you, thank you for mentioning that! It was my favorite part of this flashback and none of my betas mentioned it making me think it was just me. Thanks for letting me know it wasn't!

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Thank you, thank you, thank you for mentioning that! It was my favorite part of this flashback and none of my betas mentioned it making me think it was just me. Thanks for letting me know it wasn't!
You're very welcome. I know exactly how it feels to sneak something you hope gets noticed smile

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