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I said this at the end of the last feedback thread, but I'll repeat it here in case anyone missed it:

This brings up a point, Jenni. If you, or anyone else, notice a change to the series that doesn't seem to make sense given the single change I made to the past, please let me know. Now, since you don't yet know what that change is, that could be difficult. But if something doesn't seem right, please mention it. I might end up saying that it will all make sense in the end. On the other hand, it could also be a mistake - so please mention it so that I have a chance to correct it.

Also, James and Elisabeth... you will notice that I have a section here dealing with why searching the past doesn't work. Now, I originally had this section included further on in the story. But because of your concerns, I moved it up here. Does this deal with your concerns?

ML

The biggest problem I see is that I *still* don't have the whole stinking thing in my inbox . Just click that little send button... Well after you attach the file of course - and type in my address [or click on the email link above one of my posts].

And Linda King? *shudder*

Lex? *more shudder*

Dr. Klein *woohoo*

More? When? Now? Doesn't have to be on the boards - inbox is fine .
Carol

Carol, you will be pleased to see that I sent you an email.

ML

The only thing worse than Lex and Linda with Lois and Clark would be Lex and Linda together making Lois and Clark miserable.

Double shudder for Lois even thinking about Lex.


Ready for more please!

That little Stunt?

ML, LnC's visit to 1992 DID have an effect, didn't it?

And I'm so very glad Lex is married to some noname. Otherwise I would be worried now. Which means Lois and Lex will be together in no time. You, ML, are evil enough to pulling that kind of stunt.

Michael who looks forward to part 14. Monday? Or Sunday evening?

This story is getting more and more compelling!!

Is there really nowhere we can sneak apeak and read the entire lot in one go?

I appreciate how your story is written in such a way that the farther it goes, the more divergent it is from the original timeline. Of course, all of it is logical: Superman isn't cloned because he doesn't exist, Clark pursues Lois more aggresively because he has less to lose, The Star doesn't manufacture incidents because it is already regularly scooping The Daily Planet. All of this makes sense and in both a logical and an emotionally logical way.


Elisabeth
PS I'm convinced that the other Lois was the woman Clark was with during whatever stunt they don't really remember

Superb! The "what went wrong" mystery continues... maybe Lois and Clark's escape from STAR labs created problems for Lois because she was the only one in Metropolis at that time. Clark of that timeline was probably somewhere else in the world like Borneo?...

heh, I can continue speculating until I'm proven wrong...

So Lois is hooking up with Lex coz she's looking for a distraction... but how far's she gonna go?

Sorry. No. I'm still in the process of editing as we go along, so I don't have it posted anywhere yet. And if you're wondering about my email to Carol (given the fact that she's always bugging me to send her an email.) Well... she didn't get the story either. Just the email

Yep. You most certainly can

Anyway, everyone, thanks for the comments. Glad to see you're still reading.

ML