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#4657 07/20/03 10:52 AM
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Just a few random thoughts

Klein's proving himself pretty useful.
Luthor didn't see Klein in the surveillence system, he only saw Superman?
Shame on Clark for the obviously lousy disguise, but I guess he wasn't really thinking that the place would be bugged in the first place. Didn't really cross my mind either, but that's Luthor for you.
/me beats Lois over the head with a stick for still thinking that Lex is trying to help.
Yay Martha's still there. She rocks.
The End

Looking forward to more! smile1
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A classic instalment dealing with HoL type of storyline.

Lois is still being stupid, Clark can't figure out what he should do. I like how you had Lois seal the deal at the end. The first time she and Clark see each other for days (weeks?) what does she do? She rushes into his arms and askes about Superman.

Yep. This Lois is doomed to be with Lex. She actually derserves Lex... or me?

Tank (who thinks that if Lois got out of Metropolis... someplace far away, like Minnesota, then she'll regain her senses)

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That was... cruel.

Reminded me, in fact, of episode 2 (or 3?) of S1, when Lois hugged Clark for surviving the fall from the plane because it meant Superman was all right, too. goofy

Liked the way Martha made Lois think twice re best friend = good marriage partner. Let's hope Lois doesn't need *too* many more Kryptonite bats to the head to get the point.

Let's have MORE!

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I'm sorry, but hasn't this part already been posted? huh

I remember the part about seeing Dr. Kliens labrat ensigna, and other parts.

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hey LL,

The gfic folder is a couple of sections behind the nfic folder - soon to be caught up. Posted new section in nfic today smile

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Okay good, that makes sense. At least I'm not losing my mind laugh

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