I can't believe I get the rare honor of starting your feedback.
I have to start with a complaint. You can't end it there. Now, come on! I was perfectly OK with you ending it with Part 1/1. That was a poem. It was an hors d'oeuvre, meant to give just a tantalizing taste. It didn't fill the appetite, but then again, it was never meant to.
But this is too much. You leave him with eye-witnesses who saw his superfeat. Of course, his mom also knows that he doesn't highlight in tights but in the lack thereof.
It's been so long since the first post that I don't remember--Does Gloria know that he's Superman's kid? Was this Alt-Clark's son?
There's just way too many loose ends (No pun intended. I swear.) to leave it here.
It may be a while, though. But I'll try very hard to make it decent! 
