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Re: FDK: Honeymoon...in Vegas 1 #42678 05/15/07 06:13 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 738 Germany Tahu Columnist
Tahu Columnist Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 738 Germany	Another story of yours that will get me late to work. I only wanted to check the boards and found your story. Couldn't wait till tonight to read it. Great start and I can't wait for the next part. Loved every word of it.

Re: FDK: Honeymoon...in Vegas 1 #42679 05/15/07 06:49 PM
Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 748 The Netherlands Mrs. McLeod Columnist
Mrs. McLeod Columnist Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 748 The Netherlands	Quote Married?" Martha repeated incredulously. "They're married?" This was really a great line to start the story with! And it's definitely a great story! Quote Lois bit back the impulse to say 'following you, you idiot' and blurted out the first thing that popped into her head. "Uh, we're eloping." Quote It was a good thing that he had no idea just how thrilling that name sounded to her. Admit it, she told herself. You've got a crush on your husband. The perfect last line!! I REALLY can't wait for next part, Monday?? "I have no regrets. If you regret things, then you're sort of stepping backwards. I'm a believer in going forwards." ~Kate Winslet

Re: FDK: Honeymoon...in Vegas 1 #42680 05/16/07 03:19 AM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,367 US Sue S. Kerth
Sue S. Kerth Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,367 US	See, now was that so hard? All I wanted was a little blinking icon. Quote Hehehe... Mickey isn't going to let them back out of this. He can be a villain, but right now I do like him. Oh, Andreia, I'm fairly certain you're going to revise that opinion before the story is over. Quote I demand! I demand! How about a new part each day? No chance. But I will post part two shortly. Quote Now, why would Lois come up with an excuse like "We're in Vegas to get married" if she didn't have some subliminal desire that she won't openly fess up to. Be assured, she's going to exorcise a lot of subliminal wishes. And so will Clark. Quote This was really a great line to start the story with! Thanks! I thought it was a good attention-getter. Thanks for reading along with me. I'll have part two up shortly. Lois: You know, I have a funny feeling that you didn't tell me your biggest secret. Clark: Well, just to put your little mind at ease, Lois, you're right. Ides of Metropolis

Re: FDK: Honeymoon...in Vegas 1 #42681 05/16/07 05:18 AM
Joined: May 2006 Posts: 1,065 Los Angeles jojo_da_crow Top Banana
jojo_da_crow Top Banana Joined: May 2006 Posts: 1,065 Los Angeles	Sorry for the late FDK. I was really hoping to get this to you before you posted the next part, but eh what can you do sometimes? Quote "Um, well..." The clerk hesitated and then her tone softened somewhat. "I'm sorry, I really don't know. I was just asked to contact someone, a family member or a legal representative, and ask them to come here to make decisions regarding their care." I’m convinced that you and DJ do things like this in your story just to get me riled up. You know by now that when you give me a nugget like this that it just going to drive me crazy until I figure it out. Then it will make me lament the whole time on their horrible and terrible situation, that YOU put them in. cries This is why you are evil. Lure me into a story and hit me with something like this right off. sniff whispers You know I really love it when you do this. I know I’m a masochist. Quote "He's got a suitcase, Lois. He's leaving Metropolis. What are you going to do? Follow him onto the plane?" He has to know by now that is exactly what she will do. He should learn not to ask questions like this or it’s just gonna give her ideas. Quote She could hardly wait to get back to Metropolis and watch him explain to Mayson Drake that they were, albeit temporarily, married. Haha, I would totally rub that in as well. Score one for Lois. Quote It was a good thing that he had no idea just how thrilling that name sounded to her. Admit it, she told herself. You've got a crush on your husband. Don’t worry so do the rest of us. ^_^ I like the premise of this story so far. It seems like it will be a fun ride. runs off to read the second part that was just posted Angry Clark: CLARK SMASH! Lois: Ork!

Re: FDK: Honeymoon...in Vegas 1 #42682 05/21/07 12:10 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	looks embarrassed I said I'd come back, but I didn't... I'm here now. Quote Clark handed the agent his credit card and inwardly sighed at the injustice of having to waste fifteen hundred dollars and five hours to do something he could have accomplished in a minute's time for absolutely nothing. hehehehe! Oh, Clark, this is SO going to be worth the money. You just wait and see! giggles madly Quote Lois bit back the impulse to say 'following you, you idiot' and blurted out the first thing that popped into her head. "Uh, we're eloping." I LOVE that the first thing that popped into her head is "we're eloping" - they could have been doing any number of things, really. hehe! Lois, Lois... don't you see your subconscious is doing all the talking here? Hope you listen to it! Quote Why hadn't she told him something else? She could have told him that they were here to do a story on compulsive gambling or something - anything - else. erm... Lois? I just told you why. DUH. Quote "Come on then, Clark," she said and tried to appear enthusiastic. "Let's get married." insert small squee right here. YAY. I know, I know, I shouldn't get excited... I will anyway! The whole ceremony was priceless! dreamy sigh Quote You've got a crush on your husband. Brilliant!! You know... she's going to have an insane fit of anger when she realizes she's married to Superman! :p Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: FDK: Honeymoon...in Vegas 1 #42683 09/03/07 02:14 PM
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 898 shimauma Features Writer
shimauma Features Writer Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 898	WOW! this is starting out very promisingly, and having already read the ending (giggle ) I'm glad to have been directed to this(I don't often hit the PG side ) Looking forward to the rest! TEEEEEJ Jayne Cobb: Shepherd Book once said to me, "If you can't do something smart, do something RIGHT!

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