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FDK: Steel Shadows 18 or Did you just flashy-thing me? #42581 05/09/07 11:10 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,093 Likes: 40 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara OP Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
OP KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,093 Likes: 40 Albuquerque, NM	Part 18 Yeah, I know 19's already up, but I couldn't resist the title. Reminds me of Men In Black. And I wanted to point out that this last bit is brilliant: Quote I watched Lois's expression as she discovered that Clark was still breathing. It went far beyond relief into territory they don't have words for. If I'd ever had reason to question the risk I'd taken in standing in that alley, that one look would have been enough to settle the issue. Smiling to myself, I snuck back down to sewers. I'd saved Clark. I'd saved Superman. Life was good. I especially love the second sentence. Love it. And I love Tommy saving Superman like this. Especially his noticing Lois's relief. Tommy's really softened some, and since he's now in love himself, he can feel even better about what he's done to help. Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: FDK: Steel Shadows 18 or Did you just flashy-thing me? #42582 05/10/07 07:14 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,569 Third star to the right and st... HatMan Pulitzer
HatMan Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,569 Third star to the right and st...	lol, nice title, Sara. Don't think I ever really thought of it that way, but it is kind of an MIB moment. Or maybe MIB 2. (Which kind of sucked, come to think. Is that why no one's reading this anymore?) Glad you still appreciate my brilliance, anyway. Thanks, as always, for the comments. Paul When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.

Re: FDK: Steel Shadows 18 or Did you just flashy-thing me? #42583 05/10/07 07:24 PM
Joined: May 2005 Posts: 1,662 Seattle, WA area woody Merriwether
woody Merriwether Joined: May 2005 Posts: 1,662 Seattle, WA area	Oh, I'm reading it, but it is such a different and amazing style that it feels like normal feedback doesn't quite fit. I'll try to respond more often. But know that I eagerly await each post and will probably beg for a continuation or in-depth look after the final part. I think, therefore, I get bananas. When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about. What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence? I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.

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