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#41917 04/12/07 07:07 AM
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Loving this story. Can't wait for more.

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
#41918 04/12/07 07:58 AM
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Nice chapter, Paul. It certainly met with my expectations.

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I went for the welder first. I didn't want to have to worry about him turning his blowtorch on me. Surprised by my presence and overwhelmed by the force of my punch, he went down quickly. The other three, however, reacted a lot more quickly than I'd expected. Almost immediately after taking down the first soldier, I found myself being attacked from two sides by pipe-wielding enemies. I realized my mistake too late — these weren't street thugs, they were professional soldiers.
I love your description of the fight against B39 and Phillip distracting Tommy during the fight was funny. thumbsup
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the tank of Kryptonite got lost in the scuffle. I looked around as carefully as I could, but it had rolled completely out of sight.
Oh, dear. I hope this doesn't come back to haunt them later ...
BJ

#41919 04/12/07 08:47 AM
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the tank of Kryptonite got lost in the scuffle. I looked around as carefully as I could, but it had rolled completely out of sight.
Oh, dear. I hope this doesn't come back to haunt them later ...
BJ
Well, now we know where Lex will get the paint for the cage...

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
#41920 04/13/07 06:28 PM
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Well, glad you guys are still enjoying, and glad to hear that this part lived up to your expectations, BJ.

Thanks for taking the time to comment. smile

Part 7 coming right up.


When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.
#41921 04/15/07 03:47 AM
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I agree totally. The conversation that goes on during the fight scene is great. Particularly, as Phillip continues to talk even after he realizes it's a nuisance. Such a habit for chatty people.

Very descriptive ending. The terseness works well. They had messed up. Badly.

Elisabeth

#41922 04/15/07 08:25 AM
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Thanks! smile


When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.

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