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LOVED the changes/additions you made to the story!

Cat Grant as a star reporter? Nice touch!

I hope you continue this story very soon! And hope, somehow, you are able to insert Clark somewhere in the story.

malu

I, too, thought the additions were great! Catalina Grant, star reporter, indeed! Please don't have the chandelier fall down on her. Eh - wait - wait - that ladder! That was the chandelier, wasn't it? What a great idea!

And Lex Luthor makes me cringe and shudder, but he always does. Lois sure needs to be saved from him, that much is certain.

I, too, am curious to see if Clark will make an appearance. I guess that depends on why he is playing the part of the Angel of Words in the first place, why he is hanging around the Daily Planet, why he is guiding Lois and why he keeps himself hidden.

Very interesting! Give us the next part soon!

Ann

You could add a more Supermanish spin on the whole thing if you have Clark appear and befriend Lois. Of course then you'd have to think of a reason why he moonlights in tights and haunts the planet, but I have faith in you! Just a thought, plus you'd add yet another person to the romantic... square?

Who knows if that's a good or bad thing.

Not quite. If you'll remember, in "Phantom" during the Hannibal rehearsal, Carlotta warbling through "Think of Me", and the Phantom nearly hits her with a backdrop. That's what that was .

But thanx everyone for commenting and encouraging me in this. Next part coming up very soon.....