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Sue, I pretty much want to echo everything DJ just said. She said just about everything I've been thinking since I read this the other day. And I too love AngryClark.

But this is my absolute favorite line:
I don't know what it is about that line, but it's beautiful. I love when you throw these short stories at us. They are always fantastic!

~Kristen

LOVE IT!

I read this a few days ago and naturally got distracted by one of the many domestic emergencies that seem to be completely expected around here :rolleyes: So now I'll leave the feedback -- a little late but better than never.

Excellent story. You got Lois's reactions down perfectly, and Clark's as well. And, as has been said before, I can't see Lois breaking down in front of anyone except Clark. Swearing in front of someone else, hitting something, losing her temper maybe, but not breaking down. That would be something she would resist except in the presence of someone she truly trusted.

Nan

And if Nan thinks she was late...Well, I have a reason. Our shared laptop crashed and died a gruesome death. Getting it all back together, getting all the programs installed, and answering e-mails has been a long and tedious process, and in the meantime, I've missed out on two months worth of fanfic!

So, Sue, thank you. This was a great story, and you, as always, walked that fine line and came out beautifully at the end, with a clear look at Lois' character, Clark's character, and even Superman's character, and then you neatly tied it all together in a beautiful ending.

You are the Queen.

mmouse

Waaahhhhh!!!!!

This was awesome. *sigh*

The Little Tornado.

Sweet Lord I really have been out of it.

So sorry I missed this one the first time around. Thanks for sharing it with us.