Well, I skipped over to the other folder to read this chapter, but since I've been leaving feedback in this folder for the whole story, I figured it would be better to be consistent.
LOVE the chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one.
"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game
