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Where is the kissing?

Great part like always, but I missed Becca and a bit of kissing. wink

Can't wait for the next one.

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Hi,

Great part! grumble Hope Lois gather information that back-up Clark's stories.

grumble Lois need to trace the donation made by Mrs. Donovan with Clark's moving patters.


More ASAP, please.

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Oh, damn him (Clark) for not telling Lois. I''ve just about had enough of him! Let them talk about last night and get things out in the open! All things! wallbash


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Great part, I cant wait to see what happens with Child Services and Lois and Clark. smile1 clap

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Just a quick note before I leave for London:

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Without really noticing it, Clark had crossed the Planet’s lobby and had stepped into one of the elevators. Before he even knew it, he was in the newsroom. Everything looked as usual, but why shouldn’t it? Because Lois had kissed him? Because he had returned the kiss? Clark went down the ramp towards his desk, almost surprised that no one shot him knowing glances. But what was he expecting? That Jimmy would ask what touching Lois’ lips felt like? For Heaven’s sake, it was just a kiss, nothing out of the ordinary. He hadn’t made love to her; it had just been a kiss.
I totally loved this!!!

But I agree with everyone else, Clark. You need to tell her. If you didn't tell Lily, that was probably a mistake, and not another reason not to tell Lois!!!

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Great part. I especially loved this:

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He would end up appearing with a blue spandex suit and a charcoal jacket instead of a cape.


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Hi girls, thanks for your feedback. Hehehe, I would be really afraid of you now, hadn't I already written the revelation scene before I even posted this. So I can lie back now and wait for my beta-reader to send it back to me.

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Just a quick note before I leave for London:
London,Ann? Sigh. It's been such a long time since I was there.


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Great part!


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