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Oh, this was not good. Not good at all.
oh, an understatement if I ever heard one. peep

It is delightful reading and I am looking forward to more.


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This is so funny in its own way. But are you sure you're posting on the right side of the boards? Or will there be another version for people like me?


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Great fic!

Too short!

Great fic!

Too short!

Great fic!

Too short!

Great fic!

Too short!

Well, this could go on forever, but it does illustrate my feelings. This is a great story, but this post was just too short. I like cliffhangers as much as the next FOLC, but can we get a little bit more stuff next time?

You've convinced everyone that Lois is about to seduce Superman, but I don't see that as a given at this point. How do we know that Lois is going to come out in a red teddy or garters and lace or whatever? What if she comes out with a bucket of ice water suitable for dumping on his head? Or maybe she's going to take him right up to the point of no return and then stop! What a hit that would be!


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Clark sobbed inside
What does this mean?


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Clark sobbed inside
What does this mean?
Hmm, I intended for it to mean that he felt like sobbing, and sobbed to himself in his mind, but didn't outwardly.

So, if someone were looking at him, he would seem completely normal, although inwardly he was sobbing to himself.

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Oh, okay, I didn't see it in the context that he was sad, so I thought I might have missed something.


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Hi,

Great part! hyper


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