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FDK:Seeking Heroes-Part 8 #36575 12/30/06 08:53 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part! Quote She wanted her grandparents to call her so they could tell her what she should do. Becca whispered the plea into the empty apartment, hoping for someone to fulfill her wish. Nothing happened. Maybe she had to call herself? Becca decided to wait another couple of minutes, before she would go to the phone. What can they do? Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:Seeking Heroes-Part 8 #36576 12/30/06 10:34 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Quote Clark Kent couldn’t let Lois see how he really felt for her. She wasn’t the kind of woman he could introduce to Becca as a potential step-mother, as much as he wished that she might be. Oh, come on Clark. Give her another chance. Quote Becca had been raving about the fruit punch with cinnamon. Ooh. Sounds good. I’ve never had cinnamon in fruit punch. Quote As soon as her head had touched his shoulder she had dozed off. Awww…. Daddy’s sleepy head! Quote “Are we there yet?” she asked, drowsily as she lifted her head. Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Quote “Go inside, honey. I’ll be back in a few minutes. Lock the door behind you. Don’t open it to anyone but me and stay inside,” Clark said and headed in the direction where he heard the screams coming from. Clark needs a nanny… Or a Lois… a particular Lois. Quote He only saw its shade Do you mean shape? Or shadow? Quote It was no use to stay hidden. He didn’t change into Superman, because that would only increase the possibility that someone saw him. What’s wrong with folks seeing Superman? Quote For some strange reason, Clark’s headache increased with every step he took. The pain spread from his head through his body, taking possession of his arms and legs. Oh, my! Quote How long had he been lying in this alley? Oh, I hope not too long. Oh, my goodness. I do hope you tell us how long! Quote Becca sat on the sofa in the living room and stared at the door, intensely. She mumbled incoherent words, which mostly consisted of ‘daddy’ and ‘come back’. Oh, poor Becca!! Quote the wolf and the seven little goats Don’t think I’ve heard this one. Sounds interesting. Quote “Daddy!” she whimpered. “I’m okay, honey!” he managed to say. No, he’s not!! More soon!! You had me biting my fingernails again... ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: FDK:Seeking Heroes-Part 8 #36577 12/30/06 10:45 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,514 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,514 Likes: 29 Germany	Quote What’s wrong with folks seeing Superman? Let's say there's something wrong with folks seeing Clark change into Superman. Quote Do you mean shape? Or shadow? Oh my! You should think that I'd stop making that mistake, some day. Quote the wolf and the seven little goats -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Don’t think I’ve heard this one. Sounds interesting. It's about Mama goat leaving her seven children alone. She tells them not to open the door to strangers. And then the big bad wolf comes and tries to fool the little goats. He finnally leads tehm to believe that Mama goat has returned. They open the door and six of them are eaten by the wolf. The smallest goat can hide in the clock and survives to tell Mama goat what has happened to her children. And of course all six are saved in the end. Thanks for the feedback It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK:Seeking Heroes-Part 8 #36578 12/30/06 11:14 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Quote Let's say there's something wrong with folks seeing Clark change into Superman. Oh, I see what you mean. ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: FDK:Seeking Heroes-Part 8 #36579 12/30/06 11:45 AM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany Lara Joelle Kent Kerth
Lara Joelle Kent Kerth Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany	As usual, your story captivated me. I loved every bit of it. Most of all, I liked the reference to the seven little goats. It was one of my very favourite fairy tales when I was sweet, innocent, and little. Quote Christmas was on Sunday and Clark still had only a vague idea of what he was going to offer Becca as a Christmas present. He didn’t even know what he would give his parents. Christmas always came too soon. He had only two days left to think about the problem, less actually, because he needed to know before they flew to Smallville. Poor Clark! What to get for a seven-year-old who he calls his daughter? It can't be that difficult, lunkhead! Quote They looked up, but only briefly. Afterwards they continued their fight, bickered with each other and battered their adversary. Was this fight just a set-up to goad Superman into action, in order to test the kryptonite on him? Quote Clark tried to fly; he didn’t even care if someone was watching. But it was to no avail. He was grounded. Adding another meaning to the term 'grounded'. Quote Daddy had told her to stay inside and she had heard enough about the wolf and the seven little goats to take this advice seriously. Poor girl! And no siblings to be 'eaten' in her stead. Don't you have a nice, big grandfather clock to hide in? Quote “Daddy!” she whimpered. “I’m okay, honey!” he managed to say. Groan! I'll proclaim you the Queen of Cliffhangers if you continue like that. I'm still hanging there, my feet dangling in thin air, so come back soon! (Right now would be perfect.) The only known quantity that moves faster than light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)

Re: FDK:Seeking Heroes-Part 8 #36580 12/31/06 09:08 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	Quote Becca sat on the sofa in the living room and stared at the door, intensely. She mumbled incoherent words, which mostly consisted of ‘daddy’ and ‘come back’. This part is so heart wrenching. Poor little sweetie!!! I love how well you describe Becca's feelings of fear and hope for her dad to come back. It's just perfect!! From Nancy's feedback: Quote Clark needs a nanny… Or a Lois… a particular Lois. Yep, I second that. Clark needs a Lois. hehehe! And BEcca does too, but she doesn't really know it yet. Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

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