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Another very well written part...though I wish Superman would just tell Lois that he is Clark. I'm interested in seeing how they get out of this one.

Post again soon!

Still loving this!

I do wish he'd tell her, too, but that always adds a certain amount of suspense, and an interesting dynamic.

Keep 'em coming!

Hi,

Great part!


More ASAP, please.

MAF

Ah. Everyone's so intent on "the revelation"! lol.

Remember, though, that right now they're locked in a small room with a camera watching their every action.

Next chapter is quite long. I have 2 big midterms tomorrow (Monday for me), so it probably won't be until later at night (for me) until it gets posted. As of right now the chapter is called, "Superman and Clark Kent."

Enjoy musing over that until tomorrow!

Thanks for reviewing, faithful readers!

SmirkyRaven

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I love anything that ties my heart in a knot.
Bring on the love and the pain.

Ahh, but Smirky, all that means (the camera watching their every move) is that Lois can't get too upset or mad with Clark when she finds out his secret... she wouldn't want to give anything away.

Nice part and I look forward to "Superman and Clark Kent". Woohoo!

-- MR

All I'll say is that this story is writing itself rather than me writing *it*--I have no outline, have hardly really thought it out, and probably 90% of what ends up in each chapter is stuff written with no prior idea in my mind of what in the world was going to happen. So things will happen as the story likes, including the revelation scene...if it ever comes . So don't ask me to do something unless you talk to the Muse in charge first and figure a good way to convince it to change its mind.

Don't have a heart attack, though. I do have an idea of where it's headed, and I actually already have through chapter...<checks> Chapter 10 all but ready to post, down to the titles . And it's still going very, very strong (how else could I have written over 25000 words since last Monday night?). This story is taking a bullwhip to me; and with finals looming on the horizon this is not a good thing.

<twiddles fingers nervously, ponders homework that's due tomorrow and looks between it and DD's next chapter, then chooses the latter>

Valar, I am in a bad way!


SmirkyRaven

Wow. Lois said some moving stuff and I love the delivery. It's awesome that she's speaking to him like that but sad because she just doesn't see Clark.

It will be intresting to see how this part of the story develops.