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#34989 12/02/06 09:31 AM
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Nancy, I really enjoyed this. You can so easily see this fitting right in as a missing scene from the pilot. Although I admit to being suprised that he kissed her, although, ironically, it actually probably was the best way to get rid of her. And he didn't lie!

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She sighed somewhat angrily, picked her raincoat, donned it and walked to the door. “You don’t know what you’re missing.” She paused. “Correction. I don’t know what I’m missing.” She shook her head and walked out the door.
Good line!

And since you asked, I like The Raincoat better than The Raincat.


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#34990 12/02/06 10:09 AM
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Thanks, Lisa!! I appreciate the feedback.

I started to not have him kiss her, but then I decided it really was the best way to get rid of her.


~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
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Hi Nancy,

Brilliant, funny and blush

Poor Cat, her red face must have been quite a picture.

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Stuart

#34992 12/02/06 04:15 PM
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Cute fic, Nancy. I kind of guessed after the first paragraph that Cat was going to do that, since you put both titles up, but I still liked it.


"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game

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Cute and funny!

Jackie


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Lois: All my life.
#34994 12/02/06 05:01 PM
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Thanks, guys!!


~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
#34995 12/02/06 06:19 PM
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smile nice!! I like that Cat caught on to things - I always knew she couldn't be totally ditsy, even though we never actually see her doing any serious sort of work on the show. hehe! She would still need to have some reporter instinct and I'm glad you gave her that. smile


Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
#34996 12/02/06 08:51 PM
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Thanks, Stuart, Darcy, Jackie, and Lara.


~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

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