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#33072 09/29/06 02:30 PM
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Please tell me what you think and thanks for reading!!

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Sorry I was a bit short of FDK for part 1... I was just in a hurry to see part 2. wink

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how could she have missed the fact that Clark and Superman never showed up together?
You know... I think, 50 years from now, we'll still be wondering about that. LOL! wink

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who looked very, very good in that tight muscle-shirt and leather jacket with his hair slicked back and sunglasses on
Oh gawd yes! wink Glad she notices it too. hehehe!

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“I’m sorry, Dan, but I’d have to say no.”
clap I wish she'd told him that in the ep, too. She's too good for him. Among other things. wink Thanks for putting this right!!

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“Sorry, Dan, but I won’t be changing my mind. I’m already taken.”
ooooh!!! Even better!! smile

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Because… because I love you- both of you- and I couldn’t bear to lose you
aaaaaaawwwwwwwwww!

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But I do promise that I will always come back to you and that I’ll love you for the rest of my life.
and lots more aaaaawwww! smile

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And both of them knew that this was only the beginning of forever…
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Excellent!! Loved this story. smile Looking forward to more from you.


Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Awww how sweet! Loved it. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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Originally posted by LaraMoon:

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how could she have missed the fact that Clark and Superman never showed up together?
You know... I think, 50 years from now, we'll still be wondering about that. LOL! wink

Rofl, you bet I'm still going to be wondering about that!

Nice ending; way better than the real show. :p

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Nice, Sarah! I just now caught up with both parts and I enjoyed them both -- but especially the second one wink I think it was wise of you to not try to re-write the A-plot -- you showed the important bits in flashback, and that was perfectly sufficient. I just loved watching Lois realize that Clark was leaving the choice entirely up to her, even if it would break his heart... and then loved the way she demonstrated her choice wink Very sweet vignette, and *much* more satisfying than the original episode...

PJ


"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

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ooooh - is that club open for membership? I'd like to join! laugh


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Ooooh, Sarah! Thank you for this nice read to conclude my weekend on.

It was so warm and sweet and waffy and... oh, I'm still drooling. drool

Loved it!


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