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Here's the feedback thread for A [Parent\'s] Love That Risks Nothing - Chapter 2 . Enjoy!


"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game

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Glad to see you finally posted Part 2. Sorry it took me so long to post feedback, but I had to re-read the prologue and Part 1 first.

Great story.

Why wouldn't Lara and Jor-El just leave the ship in orbit and fly down. That's what Zara and Ching did, isn't it (with the little ship not the Palace). But then Lara and Jor-El's ship would be older so that probably wouldn't be possible.

I take it the New Krytponians don't know their King is also in orbit, eh? I can't wait to see what happens.

Would Clark be able to do this, if he had just had a major kryptonite exposure?

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When the pair got inside Clark’s apartment, he spun into some comfortable clothes while Lois rummaged in his dresser for something to borrow.
Looking forward to the next part.


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