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#32558 09/07/06 08:25 AM
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Nice part!!


Ahh... Poor CJ:

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he drank in the sight of the accumulated tokens of his former life. Yearbooks, trophies, photographs, cards…some were in boxes, some were on shelves, and some were perched lovingly in strategic positions throughout the room. All seemed to call to him.
Jenny should be calling him Sam!

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When he looked up, he saw that the door had been pushed open, and his wife standing in the opening, her expression worried.

“Clark?” she asked, taking a step toward him.
Ahh... Poor CJ again...

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Before closing the door, he took one last look at the collected memories of a lifetime, mentally said goodbye, then turned off the light. As Jenny tugged him down the hallway, he left all his emotional baggage behind and turned his attention to the present once and for all.
Dick has forgiven Bruce. Good!!

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Finally, after years of resenting Bruce Wayne for his intrusion in his life, Dick could now silently thank him, if only for giving him the opportunity to be a part of this new, wonderful family.
CJ's old life is over! Jenny should call him Sam - never Clark.

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After a while, Jenny’s voice called out from the other room. “Clark?” she said.

“Yes?” both CJ and his dad answered in unison.
Great story!!


~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
#32559 09/07/06 11:24 AM
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Really want to see a third generation sequel some time... Also be interested to see what (if anything) eventually happens between Dick and Laura when she's a little older.


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#32560 09/07/06 11:37 AM
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Hi,

Great story. thumbsup Is good to see Dick is in peace.


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CJ raised his eyebrows, looked Clark in the eye, and shook his head. “What about the grandfather thing?” he asked.

“We don’t use the g-word around here,” Clark said, his tone humorous. “Either of them. They imply old age and I sure don’t feel old enough to be a…you know.”

CJ smiled. “Denial is not just a river in Egypt,” he said, and they both chuckled.

“At least being a g-word comes with limited responsibilities. We get all the fun and don’t have to deal with all the rest of it.”
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Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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#32561 09/07/06 12:21 PM
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Beautiful, marvelous, moving, emotional and lots of tranquility and peace.

dance

You've brought a beautiful to a marvelous ending, leaving perfect room and hint to the future.

Will Laura and Dick get together? Who knows, but you left yourself happily ready for a sequel

I'm looking foward to see the whole story in the Archive so that I can read it all again and enjoy the triamph of good over evil again and again.
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Regards,

SNL


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