Great story! I've just finally read all the parts thus far so I'm just now commenting and that's why my comments are lengthy.
When you first introduced Nightwing in Chapter 7, I could not understand why in the world CJ told Dick Grayson the following:
I also thought it was great that CJ went to the cafeteria of Wayne Enterprises to mingle with the 'common' folks. I loved it that he made a new friend - Stanley, and that he didn't want to tell Stanley his name (also Chapter 7). :p
Stanley smiled. “So if I want to discuss a few ideas with you, how can I get a hold of you, Sam?”
“Just call upstairs and ask for me.” The answer was suspiciously vague, and CJ cringed a little as he said it.
“Call upstairs?” Stanley asked with raised eyebrows. “The corporate office is a big place, and something tells me you aren’t the only guy named Sam working at this joint.”
CJ looked down, took a deep breath, then regarded his new friend again. He would find out the truth eventually, he supposed. Better to tell Stanley himself than to have him find out the hard way. “I just hate being called Mr. Wayne, that’s all. It always feels like people are talking to my father when they do.”
Should I say that Chapter 7 was one of my favorites?
I really love it that Laura is playing Robin.
Then in Chapter 12:
“What does this have to do with Sam Wayne, though?” Jenny’s dad asked. Even before the words were spoken, the door to the study opened, and without a sound, CJ slipped into the room. Jenny couldn’t help but smile as their eyes met, and it was only a moment before everyone followed her gaze and looked toward their new visitor.
“It has everything to do with him,” CJ said.
Before he could finish speaking, Jenny’s mother passed out on the couch.
That was just great and what a way to end a chapter - great teaser!
