Hi,
Great start.
Beginning to feel claustrophobic, she started to struggle. Her only thought was to free herself, but when she heard a loud popping sound from under the car, her head snapped up. Her heart sank as the smell of gas drifted through the glassless windows and wisps of smoke curled up over the side of the car like ghosts, filling the interior, making her cough. Again she cried out for help, praying someone…anyone would hear her.
:rolleyes: This is a woman with bad luck.
More ASAP, please.
MAF
