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I hope you enjoyed the story. I have not seen the series in a very very very long time. But I think it was from a time of some really fun TV. And I enjoyed it. Curious to think what other's think the tale. This was not what I would have seen as my 1st choice but it wouldn't leave and well here it is. If you did not like it, you can tell me that too...it would be really helpfully if wanted to, to say why. It how we writers improve. Thanks again!

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Hi PinkLilyCat!

Welcome to the fun! I haven't gotten to reading yet, was terribly busy over the past few days. I did notice you got "Title:" in the summary/thread title. Is the story named "Lex's Cage Monologue..." or "Title: Lex's Cage Monologue". If the "Title" isn't part of the title, you can either edit it out yourself or tell us. It's only "important" so we have to proper representation when the awards season comes around early next year smile

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“She is the only person in the world not afraid of me. You fear me because of Lois. You fear me because my very being and all I stand for threatens all you stand for...because of Lois. I on the other hand accept what you can not.”

Closing his eyes he tipped his head back smiling and announced, “Lois Lane isn’t an itch to be scratched,” before opening them and meeting Clark’s again and noticed that they were angry yet hazy...this wouldn’t do. He rapped the metal bar gavel against the bars again.


Hmmm, Lex at his worst!

Welcome aboard! Hope to read more from you soon!


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I absolutely love this spin! I am a sucker for any story involving Lex and the kryptonite cage, I especially loved adding in the bit about Lois not being able to see either of them clearly. This is such a great take on Lex and his obsession with ridding the competition.

Can't wait to read whatever you post in the future!

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What an interesting story! I really enjoyed it. You give Lex a different and quite realistic perspective here. I especially like the part where he says that he knows Lois would unmask him one day, and that he never actually intended to break her and only said that to torment Superman.
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some misguided war within about wanting her to want ground version instead of the air version...Silly naive man. Only the air version would know me. Anything else sounds like a jealous person rejected or too slow to make a move.

He has a point here.
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“While she may forgive you in time she would never forgive me.” Lex stopped again and looked at Clark, letting that hang in the air between them.

“Do I see us growing old together...no honestly I don’t.”

I love this part.

Thanks for sharing! wave


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Hi there!
So nice to see another new name posting on the boards! Welcome! I think a lot of us have come back to the show after a while away from it. smile

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Frenemies...no. That was a deplorable term and neither would compromise their standards to that.

I really get a kick out of Lex even considering the term 'frenemies'! lol

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I knew Lois would be blind because she was blind to you. Once she trusts she can't see.

Oh, that's so awful! That has to be terrible for Clark to hear, too!
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And while I believe we are the 2 most powerful beings on the planet there is some truth to “hell hath no fury like a woman scorned /betrayed “ and Lois would see it as a betrayal.”

That's absolutely right! Even with the upper hand, I don't think Lex would have known what hit him!

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“While she she may forgive you in time she would never forgive me.”

Oooo, yikes. I don't even know if Lois knows that. It's really chilling to have Luthor so aware.

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Lois is not impressed with my wealth and status. Overwhelmed and flattered because it is directed at her.

Great distinction!

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“Lois Lane isn’t an itch to be scratched,”

Nice callback!

That was a fun character study!


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