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FDK: Valley of the Kings (15/16) #305103 08/17/26 06:06 PM
Joined: Apr 2023 Posts: 569 Likes: 88 JadedEvie Columnist
JadedEvie Columnist Joined: Apr 2023 Posts: 569 Likes: 88	Chapter 15 lives here. And here's the TOC. There's just a very short little epilogue left, and now that this whole thing is posted, I can believe how quickly it went by! I really didn't even intend to join the location challenge - I was busy with two other long stories that just got put on hold, not to mention Pizza Run! But once I started thinking about it, I really wistfully wanted to write about Egypt, and now I feel like this was the story I was always meant to write this summer. Reference notes coming along with the epilogue, but then we're through! Enormous thanks to 90stvfangirl who kindly agreed to beta this story at a breakneck pace! And gratitude to pacem, for a very thorough second look. Thanks for reading! Looking forward to this summer's Location Challenge! Looks like stories are due around August 1st, and then polls open for voting! And don't forget about the 2026 fundraiser! Head over to the Fundraising page to donate or consider adding a story to the Keepsake Collection fundraising drive!

Re: FDK: Valley of the Kings (15/16) JadedEvie #305114 08/19/26 10:55 PM
Joined: Dec 2024 Posts: 201 Likes: 44 Northeast Brazil peixinho Hack from Nowheresville
peixinho Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2024 Posts: 201 Likes: 44 Northeast Brazil	Quote “Honestly, I just want another shower. Every time I go into that tomb now, I end up worrying over what the ancient dust is really made of,” she said, patting what she hoped was just sand off her sleeve and trying not to think of broken canopic jars. I’d be so offended if I ended up getting sick from messing around with ancient microorganisms that are just sitting there minding their own business Quote She actually enjoyed the ferry ride back across the Nile How amazing! I think I’d be shaking with both nerves and excitement throughout the whole ride. Quote “Sometimes, when you play games, other people do occasionally win, Lois.” She gave him a look that indicated that wasn’t how things went in her world. I can't understand that either, Lois Quote “I can’t see through the back of my eyes, Lois!” “Well, how do I know that?!” A valid question Quote “Carnahan said that there was a lost civilization beneath our feet. But with everything we’ve learned about Qurna, it seems like there might be a lost civilization right next door that no one cares enough about.” Quote “Any light in the darkness is helpful,” This is one of the things I fully believe in and it gives me strength to keep going. Quote like a love as old as the desert sand itself swirling around her That's beautiful! :') Stories are written by the victors. (Hmm, come to think of it, that's not the exact quote...)

Re: FDK: Valley of the Kings (15/16) JadedEvie #305169 08/29/26 04:00 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,016 Likes: 98 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,016 Likes: 98 Germany	This might be the chapter we have all been waiting for. The secret is finally out and they talk it through. I liked how you handled the revelation. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Valley of the Kings (15/16) JadedEvie #305288 09/07/26 05:41 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,882 Likes: 12 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,882 Likes: 12 Athina, Hellas	Quote She felt like she could literally see the weight fall off of him when he wasn’t forced to make up an excuse and leave her fuming. Aww, I love how she notices it!! Sameera sounds as lovely as Abo 😊 Quote “Are you...trying to break up with me for my own good?” Better get that one out of the way asap!! Quote “I get that,” she said, sitting up. “I haven’t fully processed everything about this yet. But I had time to think when I was in the hospital and you were getting looked at– When you– You didn’t go and get checked out, did you? That’s when you went to clean up the cave-in.” Whoops 😅 Lovely chapter! I love watching them making promises and plans! What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK: Valley of the Kings (15/16) JadedEvie #305311 09/09/26 09:40 AM
Joined: Jul 2016 Posts: 568 Likes: 77 Texas V Verity Columnist
Verity Columnist V Joined: Jul 2016 Posts: 568 Likes: 77 Texas	So sweet. And the plans for the future are so hopeful. Come hang out in the Discord server! Just make a Discord account and click this https://discord.gg/fv2bAVVUBQ to join. Discord can be a little intimidating, but we keep our server simple and are always happy to help people learn their way around!

Re: FDK: Valley of the Kings (15/16) JadedEvie #305337 09/10/26 11:07 PM
Joined: Apr 2023 Posts: 569 Likes: 88 JadedEvie Columnist
JadedEvie Columnist Joined: Apr 2023 Posts: 569 Likes: 88	Peixinho, thanks for leaving such detailed feedback! Quote I’d be so offended if I ended up getting sick from messing around with ancient microorganisms that are just sitting there minding their own business lol Absolutely!! What a total nightmare! Quote A valid question Lois doesn't take anything for granted! Quote That's beautiful! :') Thank you! <3 Bakasi, I hope it was satisfying after a 14-chapter wait! Thanks so much! Anna, thanks so much for appreciating Abo and Sameera; they're the first sequel I've ever really wanted to write, lol. Quote Quote “Are you...trying to break up with me for my own good?” Better get that one out of the way asap!! Exactly! I have a handful of show quotes littered throughout this story, and I wanted to be sure to include that one just so I could take it out of their future! Verity, aw thanks! I felt like I was struggling to write that, so I appreciate that you bring up that end section! Looking forward to this summer's Location Challenge! Looks like stories are due around August 1st, and then polls open for voting! And don't forget about the 2026 fundraiser! Head over to the Fundraising page to donate or consider adding a story to the Keepsake Collection fundraising drive!

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