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Story is here!

Yeah... it's been a hot minute since I've done this posting thing...

I've love to hear your favorite line!

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Somehow I expected him to actually tell her his secret before proposing. But having her struck by lightning and getting his powers was an interesting twist.


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“You . . . wouldn’t have been using your powers to impress me, would you?”

“Hah, more like trying to keep up with you.”

That makes a lot of sense lol


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(Hmm, come to think of it, that's not the exact quote...)
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Honestly, out of all the things to gush about or be impressed by in this fic, the thing that stands out most is how you absolutely justified Clark's decision to propose before telling her his secret. It actually felt understandable rather than completely bone-headed.

Also, absolutely loving Lois with the powers! Is there a little bit of telepathy going on, with her feeling Clark's feelings?

Also, do we get a sequel?


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Agree with Queenie! Love how you showed that decision to propose as a panic indecision brought on by stress and insecurity.

Loving so much about this.

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for the sound of her heartbeat to filter back into my senses and weave its way back into the ambient rhythm of my being.


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Her expression is one of surprise, but good surprise, I’m sure. She’s searching my eyes again, not exactly hesitating, but contemplative. Or like she’s letting the moment settle over us along with the pouring rain.


Love this phrasing. I can feel it settle in my own heart.


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Oh my god this was so absolutely amazing! I love the way you played Clark's thoughts as he shifted from telling her he's Superman to proposing to her. This is so elegantly written from the way you've caught both of their voices as well as the pacing and timing. I keep rereading and squealing when I get to the epilogue lol. This is just such a great little fic to come back to when I need a laugh or pick me up.


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