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Here is where the feedback for chapter 2 goes. Sorry again for the mix up with the beginning. Also, in case it isn't obvious, any non LnC characters, places, and plotlines are not original, they are from Downton Abbey, my second favorite show.

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I don’t think I have seen a single episode of Downton Abbey but I’m finding this premise very interesting! Wondering if Clark will notice she is missing and go in search of her?

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Turning around, I am stunned to see that the floor-length mirror by the vanity is glowing.

Is it an antique? It would be crazy it this was the same mirror!

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“My name is Lois. Lois Lane. I’m a reporter for The– for LNN.”

I love how calm she is! Just a semi-typical day for her. Then, again, she probably doesn't realize how far she's gone!

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“Lord– Earl— I’m sorry, what?” Goodness, neither of us is going to get anywhere if we keep on like this.

lol I don't know Downton Abbey but this character is great!

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I think Old Lady Grantham would faint if any of the girls cut their hair like that.”

...aren't they all about to cut their hair like that? Or is that just in the US? Poor Lady Grantham!

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now fairly certain that this Lois Lane is not dangerous,

lol I don't know if I'd put money on that. Maybe not dangerous, but certainly danger-prone, or danger adjacent!

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“Because it’s the same mirror.”

Cool!

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Even though I’d thought as much before, it’s still a bit disconcerting to hear her confirm my suspicions, and to think of the implications of what it all means.

I feel like Lois has this effect on people! Fun to see it in this context!

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No matter who she is or why she ended up here, she’s stuck here now, and in desperate need of a place to stay.

Time travel is such a beast!

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Brushing a piece of hair out of her face, she turns back to the window, biting her lip in thought for a moment, before she narrows her eyes, and leans out the window, peering at the ground.
“Is there any way I could get down from here?”

I love that even here, Lois is looking for ways to fall off buildings! lol

This is a fun cross-over!


Looking forward to this summer's Location Challenge! Looks like stories are due around August 1st, and then polls open for voting!

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Ooo! This is quite intriguing. I haven't seen much of Downton Abbey but I think I will definitely enjoy this. Curious how you're going to bring Clark in.

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I'm really liking the new character! I suppose she's from Downton Abbey, which I'm not familiar with, but you're doing a great job with her!

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“Well if I were to believe in magic mirrors, which, given the evidence,” I gesture to her with a pointed look of my own, “I suppose I must, then I should think that there should be some reason for why out of all of the mirrors in the world, you came out of Lady Mary’s.” She tilts her head in acknowledgement before glancing back at the mirror. As she does, her eyes light up, as if she’s just realised something.

“Because it’s the same mirror.”


Yes!! I thought the same the moment Lois's eyes lit up!!

I think Lois has just found a very good and smart trouble-making twin! grin


What we've got here is failure to communicate...

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