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FDK: Vitality (Prologue/24) #304689 06/28/26 08:37 PM
Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 1,043 Likes: 52 SuperBek Top Banana
SuperBek Top Banana Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 1,043 Likes: 52	Prologue TOC I was actually feeling scared to post after not really posting in so long. That was fairly painless lol Thanks for reading Comments can go here. Last edited by SuperBek; 06/28/26 08:40 PM.

Re: FDK: Vitality (Prologue/24) SuperBek #304691 06/29/26 06:18 AM
Joined: Dec 2024 Posts: 201 Likes: 44 Northeast Brazil peixinho Hack from Nowheresville
peixinho Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2024 Posts: 201 Likes: 44 Northeast Brazil	I like the title. Even though it's just one word, it feels powerful, just like "Purity" and "Misery" by Yvonne Connel. They've only been married for five years, and Lois already has to deal with the possibility of becoming a widow? That's not fair! And Clark isn't going to tell her right away, huh? Interesting... Stories are written by the victors. (Hmm, come to think of it, that's not the exact quote...)
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Re: FDK: Vitality (Prologue/24) peixinho #304693 06/29/26 12:23 PM
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SuperBek Top Banana Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 1,043 Likes: 52	Originally Posted by peixinho I like the title. Even though it's just one word, it feels powerful, just like "Purity" and "Misery" by Yvonne Connel. Thank you! I usually do that as sort of an interim title (have just the one word), and sometimes it ends up sticking because it fits! Originally Posted by peixinho They've only been married for five years, and Lois already has to deal with the possibility of becoming a widow? That's not fair! And Clark isn't going to tell her right away, huh? Interesting... Totally unlike Clark to keep something important from her, huh? 😅 But yeah ... 😭😭😭
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Re: FDK: Vitality (Prologue/24) SuperBek #304694 06/29/26 02:39 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,015 Likes: 98 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,015 Likes: 98 Germany	I'm intrigued. I'm guessing he won't stay away from kryptonite. Can't wait for that next part. I'm hooked already. It's never too dark to be cool.
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Re: FDK: Vitality (Prologue/24) bakasi #304706 06/29/26 10:54 PM
Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 1,043 Likes: 52 SuperBek Top Banana
SuperBek Top Banana Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 1,043 Likes: 52	Originally Posted by bakasi I'm intrigued. I'm guessing he won't stay away from kryptonite. Can't wait for that next part. I'm hooked already. Thank you for reading! I won't spoil anything 😅 Chapter 1 is up, though!

Re: FDK: Vitality (Prologue/24) SuperBek #304724 07/03/26 02:12 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 4,135 Likes: 79 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 4,135 Likes: 79 Somewhere on the East Coast	Urgh! I read Chapter One before reading the prologue. Quote “Superman, I hate to have to say this, but I’m afraid that if you continue, well, being you . . .” Dr. Klein rotated in his chair to face the superhero. His hands fiddled with the buttons of his lab coat, and he was unable to meet Superman’s eyes. “Next time you’re exposed to kryptonite, you may not recover.” As my fellow commenters have mentioned, this is an intriguing concept! Repeated exposure to Kryptonite which leads to a weakening of his molecular structure makes a great deal of sense. As with ordinary humans prolonged contact with any kind of radioactive material will have negative effects. Hmmm, he might have to consider retiring... Oh boy, he has to tell Lois all about this! Now is not the time to be a Lunkhead! Thanks so much for posting! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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