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Remember, this hasn't been beta'd yet. Too excited for this one. Laughter, romance, and sports! Thank you.

Chapter 1

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Hack from Nowheresville
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Nice start! I admit I'm not a big fan of Clark 'marking his territory' usually but this seems to be just the right amount. Does Lois know Clark’s *big* secret yet? I may have missed it or my brain has finally turned into mush. Regardless, can't wait to see where this is going.


"Everything is okay in the end... If it's not okay, then it's not the end." ~Anonymous
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Pulitzer
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Oh, this is bound to be interesting. I love this particular moment in the show - when they've finally both admitted to loving each other, but Clark has not yet revealed his secret to her. And now the next potential rival is just around the corner.


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I love when people use this part of their relationship in stories - it's so rife with possibility!

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She’d stayed late, past eleven, reluctant to leave the warmth of his apartment and the quiet certainty blooming between them.
Love this phrasing!

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Briefly hers, once.
Ope. Love this phrasing, too. And yikes!

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Jimmy, still hovering like a kid at story time, leaned in.
lol Perfect Jimmy!

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And now he was asking for her help like none of that mattered.
Oh, dang! That's such a mic drop sentence!

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--this felt like a crack in the glass.
Dan Scardino had barely cleared out of their lives, and now here was someone new.
Aw, poor Clark, That has to feel like such a betrayal to walk into.

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"It’s like the universe keeps testing us, trying to see if we’ll flinch.”
Aww. That really tugs at the heartstrings!


Looking forward to this summer's Location Challenge! Looks like stories are due around August 1st, and then polls open for voting!

And don't forget about the 2026 fundraiser! Head over to the Fundraising page to donate or consider adding a story to the Keepsake Collection fundraising drive!

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