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You can find the chapter HERE

Rememeber this has not been beta'd.

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Yay, a new chapter!

I can understand why the coach would be a little leary of Clark but the dude needs to dial it back a bit before it makes him look way too guilty lol

One thing I wasn't sure about is how Clark found out what injuries were happening. I really appreciate the perspective he brings to the severity of the injuries and their recovery time but I'm not sure where he got the info. (just a thought)

Can't wait to see where this goes from here!


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Originally Posted by aPurpleOkie
Yay, a new chapter!

I can understand why the coach would be a little leary of Clark but the dude needs to dial it back a bit before it makes him look way too guilty lol

One thing I wasn't sure about is how Clark found out what injuries were happening. I really appreciate the perspective he brings to the severity of the injuries and their recovery time but I'm not sure where he got the info. (just a thought)

Can't wait to see where this goes from here!

One way to think of it is that Clark is a sports guy. He would follow the team even if it wasn't a professional team. He lives in Metropolis and keeps up with the football team and the injured list. It would also be news that the school has such a short list of injured. (I follow sports)

I'm glad you are enjoying this. I am finishing it up, already writing Chapter 8.

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That makes sense. Thank you! I forget people follow that sort of thing. :facepalm:


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Originally Posted by aPurpleOkie
That makes sense. Thank you! I forget people follow that sort of thing. :facepalm:

It’s all good—I grew up around football and baseball, whether it was on TV or at live games. I never really played, unless you count a couple of years as a kid and one summer league with the bank I worked at in my early twenties.

My family and I would even take vacations to football events. I know not a lot of people, especially females grew up like I did.

Thank you for reading and enjoying.

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I don't know the first thing about football, but I'm enjoying this. With the hint you dropped on Discord, this whole story should be right up my alley. I'm hooked. Can't wait for more.


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Originally Posted by bakasi
I don't know the first thing about football, but I'm enjoying this. With the hint you dropped on Discord, this whole story should be right up my alley. I'm hooked. Can't wait for more.


Umm, I wonder what hint you might be talking about! LOL! It is about finished, just half a chapter left. I am so glad you are enjoying it.

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This got tense!

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“Planning to do any actual work today, or should I just pencil in your honeymoon?”
lol This sounds just like him.

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Flirting in the bullpen—something she never imagined herself doing, let alone enjoying. But with Clark, it felt natural. Easy. And maybe a little dangerous.
Fun!

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“It wasn’t that kind of hurt.”
This is such a graceful way to put that.

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Doesn’t that raise a few red flags?
YUP. My fantasy football team this year makes me wish this doctor was hanging around the NFL, though! lol

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Instead of sitting, Clark moved behind her, resting a steady hand on her shoulder.
I feel like I can really see this, like it was from the show.

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Lois watched him go, a flicker of something tightening in her chest. He hadn’t said a word—but something about the way he moved, the way he left, made her feel like the air had shifted.
Ooo, that's intriguing!

“Look, I know you trust him. But you’ve trusted the wrong men before.”
jawdrop Wow. You can feel that hit right off the page!


Looking forward to this summer's Location Challenge! Looks like stories are due around August 1st, and then polls open for voting!

And don't forget about the 2026 fundraiser! Head over to the Fundraising page to donate or consider adding a story to the Keepsake Collection fundraising drive!

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