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#294519 12/25/22 02:57 AM
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A bit early with these chapters since I'm gonna be busy later.

peep

Sorry, Clark... I tried to take these chapters a different direction, and they did not work. The warehouse scene had to happen. whinging

What did you think?

-Bek
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I think it's good the warehouse burned down. I think it'll help him put it behind him. I do wonder if they'll ever find the globe or whatever.

And it's super good Lois found him and not the firemen.....

Also, glad he can shave now at least wink

Anyway, looking forward to tomorrow ^_^

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This Clark is truly scared of himself. I enjoyed every bit of this chapter. The way he lost control of his emotions and burned the warehouse down. Lois saving him and dragging him back to work. And now there's a press conference at EPRAD. What about the asteroid? Will it hit after all?

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Originally Posted by Blueowl
Also, glad he can shave now at least wink

He's certainly glad he can shave too! lol


Originally Posted by Blueowl
I think it's good the warehouse burned down. I think it'll help him put it behind him. I do wonder if they'll ever find the globe or whatever.

And it's super good Lois found him and not the firemen.....

Originally Posted by bakasi
This Clark is truly scared of himself. I enjoyed every bit of this chapter. The way he lost control of his emotions and burned the warehouse down. Lois saving him and dragging him back to work.


I think I alluded to this above, but the warehouse scene, which ended up being very important, was not actually what I'd originally planned. peep

I'd tried to take him in a different direction (I tried to be nicer to poor Clark! He's certainly been through enough already, hasn't he??), but it didn't work, and instead, the warehouse scene had to happen. whinging

And yes, yet again, Lois saved him! She seems to always get to him when he needs her most love


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And now there's a press conference at EPRAD. What about the asteroid? Will it hit after all?

We'll find out! Posting the final three chapters now!


Thank you all for reading along!!

-Bek
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sad pobre Clark, ha pasado por tanto y sigue siendo esencialmente bueno... cualquiera se habría vuelto loco o algo peor.

Seguiré leyendo.

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Originally Posted by CarolD
sad pobre Clark, ha pasado por tanto y sigue siendo esencialmente bueno... cualquiera se habría vuelto loco o algo peor.

Seguiré leyendo.

Yes! It is amazing how he was able to recover as much as he has!

Thank you SO MUCH for reading! I hope you like the ending! love

-Bek


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