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Let me know what you think

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Oh my goodness, 100% LOVED this! smile1

OF COURSE Lois would follow him up the staircase, not thinking at all about her own safety. lol And I loved the interaction between L&C -- her immediate attraction to him and fascination with his "magic" was very well done.

Can't wait for the next installment! hyper

Thank you for sharing!

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OMG SQUEEEE!! SHE CLIMBED THE STAIRS!!!! Of course she did! Oh, I love it!

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Very cool. And of course everyone would think what he can do are magic tricks wink

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I am sooo loving these! I love how she feels safe, even when falling.

Thanks bakasi!

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Wow, thanks so much for your comments. I love writing in this universe. Got at least two more fics up my sleeve.


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I hope the next two are very long---unless, of course, you come up with more! Because these are fantastic. smile1 smile1

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Hi Barbara!
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. Lois held her breath while her mind was going into overdrive trying to find a logical explanation for the things she saw.
Alien superpowers, fueled by the cold winter sun.
LOIS: laugh

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Lois didn't know what drove her to climb up the stairs after MagiKal.
Oh boy. Never read Peter and the Beanstalk?

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"Finally," he whispered. "I was beginning to wonder if this would ever stop."
Yeah. Not planned on a moonwalk, did he?

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Once again, he had vanished into thin air. This was magic, indeed.
And we have contact. Repeat, we have made contact!

Fun scene. And Lois is in no way engaging in dangerous activities! clap

LOIS: *He* went up there, so it got to be safe.

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Love it!!!! More please! laugh


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Clark's tricks are so impressive! I love the Lois POV in this! She's so mesmerized!


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That's Lois Lane! Never has time to check the water level before diving in! The ice spiral staircase is a great idea and yeah, its a pity Jimmy wasn't there to take pictures.


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Originally Posted by Morgana
its a pity Jimmy wasn't there to take pictures

Yeah, I'd love one, too. laugh


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