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All the free AOL disks in the world aren't enough for these two. wink And little Ian is sleeping soundly tonight, but Clark may be up tossing and turning. frown


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The sparks are certainly flying. Doesn't this Lois need rescuing? I'm dying with curiosity how you'll handle the revelation. But wait a moment, didn't you say this is book one of three? This might take a while. Arghh. Keep the chapters coming.


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I agree sparks are definitely flying here. Keep it coming!


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I can't wait for them to be in the same room again ^_^ I think if they continue emailing much longer, their sparks might fry their computers.
Looking forward to more.

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Some of these emails are hilarious! The one about Lana staying up all night reading and crying. Then Pete thinking someone had died. Cracked me up. rotflol

And the T-Ball score discussion was another one. (I noticed the easter egg wink )

Who says long distance can't be fun! laugh

Great job with the dialogue and characterization.

And the rescue............ Is this a foreshadowing of Clark running out?

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He rocketed back up above the clouds, and watched the group of volunteer searchers grow closer and closer to the boy. As he began to wake fully and realize where he was, Ian began to cry in earnest. And Clark watched as the search team froze, listening, and then began to run. Within seconds, he was scooped into the arms of a middle aged woman. The man beside her stripped off his coat, wrapping it around the little boy, and shouted for help.

Sniffle! Best rescue ever! Little Ian, although he never said a word, was adorable! Of course I am a nut for Golden retrievers! Usually the first rescue in a story is big and dramatic, but this time like in Miami they were small but had a HUGE impact on the persons involved as well as their families. Clark so desperately wants to help, yet is worried about upsetting the life that he has created in Smallville. On the other hand, he wants to have someone to share the adventure with, not to brag, but to simply talk about it. AnnieM you and KathyB have created a wonderful universe where Lois and Clark fall in love without a lot of unnecessary angst. What a lovely, breezy story to read as summer begins. Thank you.

Oh yeah, the emails! What a hoot! Each time one appears I hear, 'You've got mail!' Memories....


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