Oh, Marcy, don't worry about Clark being too much out of character! This isn't the first LnC story I've read where Clark and Lois are married, and Clark still hasn't told her his secret. He sure is a lunkhead, so much so that you almost want to strangle him with a Kryptonite-colored tie sometimes (but then you know what
I think about deathfic, don't you?) and anyway, he's just so charming too! Honestly, he's the kind of lunkhead that you want to kiss, not kill. And I think he makes a picture-perfect Cary Grant!!
I think my favorite part of this story was where you told us why Lois hasn't figured out Clark's secret on her own. It's because she wants him to tell her himself, and if he won't do it, she won't have him! That really makes sense to me. Of course, I'm sure you'll make him tell her sooner or later in this story, and boy, am I looking forward to
that scene!
I love this story! I've been waiting so eagerly for this chapter. And now I'm slavering for more!
Ann
I am enjoying the premise and I am curious how this will unfold. I figure if it is an alt-Clark, I get geared for any type of plot 
I don't see Lois getting along with this woman!