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#27468 01/22/06 12:50 AM
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I can see why he might be uncomfortable with the idea of becoming Bruce's son - maybe he can find some way to distance himself a little in the public eye, e.g. by acting as though they don't like each other much.

One point that occurs to me - you had CJ interning for Bruce a few months earlier as himself, and people from Wayne Industries etc. must have met him then. Won't they notice him reappear as Sam?


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#27469 01/22/06 01:19 PM
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Well, I can see the excuse that the internship was really being Robin -- remember his statement to Jenny that he only had one job. Did he actually do Wayne Enterprises stuff? My concern would be all the people at home who know him who might recognize the news about Sam.

Either way, he's gonna have to pull off a pretty good disguise for his physical features.... And having Jenny suddenly take up with the Young Master Wayne? Her family might ask questions. I know she's thinking about telling her parents, but that doesn't help any extended family.

Enjoying the tale so far and really looking forward to seeing how you cover all your bases!

#27470 01/23/06 01:55 PM
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Another great part! smile1

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#27471 01/26/06 10:36 AM
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Hi,

Great part.

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He blinked, looked at CJ, and began to laugh nervously. “I'd tell you to give me whatever rabbit's foot you've been rubbing,” he said. The statement only caused CJ's frown to deepen, and Jon looked away.
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#27472 01/27/06 09:19 PM
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I'm am really liking this. Looking forward to the next part!


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