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Well, Angelic Editor, from your elevated, celestial postition you have certainly figured out what is really keeping Clark and Lois apart. His ever so smooth lies, which make him seem just perfect, and her intimidated awe at the sight of his perfection! Her feeling that she isn't good enough for him, and his inability to confess that he isn't as flawlessly good as she thinks.

So, if you want to keep this a piece which explains why Lois and Clark have such a hard time getting together, consider your story finished and perfect! But, of course, if you want to show us Lois and Clark getting out of the impasse where you put them, you'll just have to write a sequel.

Ann

** Edited to include part no in header - LabRat

Oh, very well done! The words, the emotions... everything flowed so nicely... Great piece!

I won't demand a sequel, but if you want to write one, you can be sure I'll read it

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Thank you so much for the incredible feedback! I was initially so worried about posting my own first fic -- I've been a beta for a couple years now and love it -- that I nearly didn't. But seriously, thanks for the kind words and the encouragement. I really must sit down and plot out a sequel!

In the past I've mostly read stories which dealt with Clark trying to regain some kind of friendship with Lois and himself doing the distancing. So at least for me, this is a new angle. It's quite believeable for Lois to feel pretty insecure not only in her job but in her private life as well.

Thank you for this great vignette, though if given a choice I'd also see a continuation/sequel.

I really liked it.

I absolutely love this part. It shows the vulnerability and insecurities of Lois.

It's a nice story on itself, but if you feel the urge to write more ot it, who am I to stop you?

ETA: I just noticed you have already posted part 2, so I'm gonna go read it.

Hi,

Great start.